Poem from critique: Blot
example poem inspired by eckho scott's poem in the high critique forum which may be read here: https://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry/forum/topic7487-critique-please.aspx?MessageID=14459#post14459
She leaned into the mirror
cleaning her mascara.
Thick red lipstick, she painted her lips
and repracticing the smile
that hid the pain.
she cleaned the red from her teeth,
so no one could see her rage.
into the tissue,
a stain thrown into the bin with his key.
Copyright © Jack Webster | Year Posted 2019
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