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Podrida (Spanish) : Rotten.

Podrida. There’s a flower in the garden, its face turned to the sun, petals still glowing, a faint shimmer in the light. But look closer. Time is whispering secrets, slowly pulling it apart. Roots buried deep, but they’re fading, crumbling in silence. On the surface, it’s whole, it’s fine. But inside, it’s soft, losing its strength, weakening each day. A touch, just a breeze, and the petals— they fall, disappear like dust, like lost memories. What seemed strong, solid, lasting— it’s all a lie. Fragile threads holding together something already gone. Life, like the flower, pretends. But it’s breaking, slowly, turning to ash with the smallest push. Podrida. Not just a flower, but everything we thought was real.

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Date: 8/29/2024 5:20:00 PM
Hi Ariana, what a lovely, sad poem. Pain so real and loss so deep and confusing. My best wishes for you. Also, I just noticed your comment on my short story, sorry my response is so late. I'm not used to getting comments on my short stories. Thank you so much for reading it and I'm happy you enjoyed it. I still see some corrections that need to be made in it, sorry.
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Ariana Pataki
Date: 9/15/2024 3:40:00 AM
Hi James. Thank you for reading my poem. Oh I remember reading it, a lovely story. I'm happy you enjoyed my poem too. And don't apologize about it, it's fine completely. Have a lovely day, hugs, Ariana.

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