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Plunging Into the Pool of Love

Everyday I'm glad to greet The yummy and special treat I am so lucky to find It is still blowing my mind How lucky my big day was When my heart made quite a fuss Wanting you by me forever I can't believe I took the plunge With a deep and final lunge Into the pool of your sweet love Something inside made me shove My heart out of it's hiding place Trying to forget the trace Of despair others have caused Making it crawl up and pause Taking a break for a while It never liked any style Of lovers that crossed my path And pain left in the aftermath Until it took a little peek And started to slowly leak Love that dripped out inch by inch Not even making a flinch Of worry that this would end With heartache and pain again Soon my heart was full of joy Since it let a loving boy In with no regrets at all Secure and happy--no more wall Around it to keep this love out Knowing what real loves about

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Date: 2/11/2014 3:26:00 AM
Robin this is a very cool write...David
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Date: 2/8/2014 8:36:00 PM
gosh, I never met anyone that could make so many rhymes about love!! You go, girlfriend!!!
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Date: 2/8/2014 7:57:00 PM
Nice rhyming in a write that is easy to understand. It is also very imaginative.
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Date: 2/8/2014 10:25:00 AM
This is a great piece about love Robin..I truly enjoyed it....Tim
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