Plugged-Up Drain

A dream I had before summer:
"I should publish my poetry so I could become known forever!"
That precious dream went down the drain

The last idea I had in mind:
"I should take a cool shower so I could feel as scrumptious as ever!"
That foul idea plugged up the drain
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Davis Avatar
September 27, 2013 at 6:51 PM
This is a clever and unique write. nice job
Mister Roboto Avatar
November 10, 2011 at 1:30 AM
If your poetry is HONEST and Pure with No hidden agendas, it shows. Never worry about becoming known. I write for a living. Take a different route....and you will prosper! Just advice. Keep LIVIN BRO! I'm pullin' for you. NAMASTE'
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