Plucking the Fringe

plucking the fringe
   off birds of a feather
   the skies have eyes
   the balloons have weather


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Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Sambourne Avatar
March 26, 2022 at 7:10 PM
Another superb posting, Maureen. Your lines are remarkably original + startling. Congratulations! Brian
Pigeon Tart Avatar
March 27, 2022 at 5:05 PM
Thank you Brian! I startle myself all the time. Your kindness is most appreciated. Take care! xomo
Connelly Avatar
August 25, 2021 at 5:24 AM
Thoughts and images after reading this Maureen are floating in my airhead. Beautiful Maureen. Thanks.
Faulkner Avatar
August 21, 2021 at 4:52 PM
And your verses - get better and better :)
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 23, 2021 at 8:01 AM
Thank you! I’m barely writing theses days, but once in a while some words smack me around and have their way with me ;), xomo!
Bauer Avatar
August 21, 2021 at 11:53 AM
i love the way this poem sounds, maureen! so much fun to read...
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 23, 2021 at 7:58 AM
Thank you Ilene, have a lovely day! xomo
Leffanta Avatar
August 21, 2021 at 11:02 AM
I wondered where weather forecasters got their hot air . . . .
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 21, 2021 at 11:34 AM
A hearty har har! <3
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