Plucking the Fringe

plucking the fringe off birds of a feather the skies have eyes the balloons have weather ***

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Brian Sambourne

Date: 3/26/2022 7:10:00 PM

Another superb posting, Maureen. Your lines are remarkably original + startling. Congratulations! Brian

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 3/27/2022 5:05:00 PM

Thank you Brian! I startle myself all the time. Your kindness is most appreciated. Take care! xomo

Jeff Connelly

Date: 8/25/2021 5:24:00 AM

Thoughts and images after reading this Maureen are floating in my airhead. Beautiful Maureen. Thanks.

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 8/21/2021 4:52:00 PM

And your verses - get better and better :)

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 8/23/2021 8:01:00 AM

Thank you! I’m barely writing theses days, but once in a while some words smack me around and have their way with me ;), xomo!

Ilene Bauer

Date: 8/21/2021 11:53:00 AM

i love the way this poem sounds, maureen! so much fun to read...

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 8/23/2021 7:58:00 AM

Thank you Ilene, have a lovely day! xomo

Rico Leffanta

Date: 8/21/2021 11:02:00 AM

I wondered where weather forecasters got their hot air . . . .

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 8/21/2021 11:34:00 AM

A hearty har har! <3