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Plight of the Dandelions

Intense shivers ripple my spine; She is coming … We are stranded by her sweet sirens song of doom I feel her hand upon my waist, a sharp wrench and my stability is gone Her warm breath expels my feathery seed, Their heads and roots chopped to make her tea

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Date: 5/24/2021 7:12:00 AM
Lovely poetry...has a unique flavour (no pun intended) to it all. Good work, Melody! My very best regards to you. :) john P.s I have always been fascinated by dandelions too.
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Melody Wiggett
Date: 3/9/2022 12:09:00 AM
:) Thank you John :) Don't they just look like fluffy little heads of hair :)
Date: 12/8/2020 9:24:00 AM
...What....no dandelion wine....nice treatment of a much maligned "flower".
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Melody Wiggett
Date: 12/9/2020 2:28:00 PM
:) next time for the wine ;) I actually love dandelions, they’re so fragile and beautiful:) they fascinate me.

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