Pleiades I-Imagine

Imagine a snow scene,
icicles and ice cream,
immense hills of candy,
invitingly handy,
indulge in gingerbread,
inhale treats and don't fret,
ingest in heavens spread.




2-25-17
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Hauser  Avatar
March 5, 2017 at 9:13 AM
Beautiful!
Martin Avatar
March 4, 2017 at 2:23 PM
On a diet at the moment, so definitely evoked an emotional response! Great poem and congratulations Cheryl! :-)
Hoffman Avatar
March 4, 2017 at 5:19 PM
I hate dieting too Mark~thanks so much for kind comment~Che :)
Merryman Avatar
March 3, 2017 at 2:07 PM
A sweet lover's delight! I love your lines "immense hills of candy, invitingly handy". Congrats! Blessings,Kim
Hoffman Avatar
March 3, 2017 at 4:36 PM
Thank you so much Kim; a nice surprise! Blessings back~Che :)
Allison Avatar
March 1, 2017 at 5:21 PM
I don't want to imagine it I want to see it for real Cheryl! Congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
Hoffman Avatar
March 1, 2017 at 8:07 PM
Lol wouldn't that be sweet! Thanks for kind comment Jan; was a nice surprise!~Che :)
Hoffman Avatar
March 1, 2017 at 8:06 PM
Lol wouldn't that be sweet! Thanks for kind comment Jan; was a nice surprise!~Che :)
Hoffman Avatar
March 1, 2017 at 8:02 PM
Lol wouldn't that be sweet! Thanks for kind comment Jan; was a nice surprise!~Che :)
Hoffman Avatar
March 1, 2017 at 7:59 PM
Lol wouldn't that be sweet! Thanks for kind comment Jan; was a nice surprise!~Che :)
May Avatar
March 1, 2017 at 7:39 AM
Congrats on your win cheryl
Hoffman Avatar
March 1, 2017 at 7:57 PM
Thanks so much for kind comment Joseph; was a nice surprise!~Che :)
Andresen Avatar
March 1, 2017 at 3:34 AM
- Congratulations on your great win in Pleiades I contest, Cheryl :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Hoffman Avatar
March 1, 2017 at 8:10 AM
Thanks so much Anne-Lise; a nice surprise this morning!~Che :)
Rodrigues Avatar
February 28, 2017 at 10:24 PM
Back for congrats!
Hoffman Avatar
March 1, 2017 at 8:10 AM
Thanks so much Kim; a nice surprise this morning!~Che :)
Burch Avatar
February 28, 2017 at 10:17 PM
Yea! Congratulations Cheryl!! Big Hugggs deb :)
Hoffman Avatar
March 1, 2017 at 8:09 AM
Thanks so much Deborah; a nice surprise this morning!~Che :)
Roper Avatar
February 28, 2017 at 9:44 PM
Congratulations on your win, Cheryl, well done :)
Hoffman Avatar
March 1, 2017 at 8:09 AM
Thanks so much Eve; a nice surprise this morning!~Che :)
Bennett Avatar
February 28, 2017 at 8:39 PM
LOVE this--now, where are the cookies !! ~~ Jeanie ~~
Hoffman Avatar
February 28, 2017 at 8:42 PM
My favorite is oatmeal raisin cookies~gotta have my fiber, lol! Thanks for kind comment Jeanie!~Che :)
Dietrich Avatar
February 27, 2017 at 4:49 PM
VERY imaginative indeed, Cheryl!
Hoffman Avatar
February 27, 2017 at 8:30 PM
Thanks so much for kind comment Andrea; for some reason my imagination thought about sweets which I don't eat that much of!~Che :)
Rodrigues Avatar
February 27, 2017 at 9:32 AM
Indeed heaven's spread! Oh to be a child again, without toothache pounding at my head.
Hoffman Avatar
February 27, 2017 at 8:28 PM
No toothaches or weight gain either, lol! Thanks so much for kind comment Kim!~Che :)
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