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Pleasures

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Like waves at peace on sandy shores, the pleasures of your heart grant me rest...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Lynn Marie
Date: 8/19/2017 11:57:00 PM
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The word and feeling that spring to mind is Heaven, Charlie:) xo
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Charlie Smith
Date: 8/20/2017 8:12:00 AM
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That was my intent Dear Lynn, thank you...
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Darren White
Date: 2/7/2017 1:04:00 PM
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This is a little gem of a monoku! What a great image you paint.
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Charlie Smith
Date: 2/7/2017 8:24:00 PM
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Thanks Darren, best wishes to you...
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 2/2/2017 7:38:00 PM
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very nice, Charlie.
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Charlie Smith
Date: 2/4/2017 7:16:00 AM
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Thank you Andrea...
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 1/31/2017 8:04:00 PM
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What a beautiful image you create in the first line and the second is very touching. It takes a gift to do so much in a monoku. Awesome! Hugs, Carolyn
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Charlie Smith
Date: 1/31/2017 8:20:00 PM
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You are most gracious Carolyn and I thank you so much...
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/30/2017 9:01:00 PM
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Absolutely fascinating, Charlie....Your heart grants me rest....how delightful.
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Charlie Smith
Date: 1/30/2017 9:12:00 PM
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Lovely note Eileen, thank you...
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Tim Smith
Date: 1/30/2017 1:21:00 PM
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Oh wow Charlie...this is fantastic
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Charlie Smith
Date: 1/30/2017 9:09:00 PM
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Thank you my friend...
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/30/2017 1:13:00 PM
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So very nice Charlie :)
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Charlie Smith
Date: 1/30/2017 9:08:00 PM
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You are so kind, thank you Heidi...
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Chris Green
Date: 1/30/2017 1:11:00 PM
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This is absolutely beautiful and comforting Charlie.
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Charlie Smith
Date: 1/30/2017 9:07:00 PM
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Thank you Chris...
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/30/2017 1:04:00 PM
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- Sounds peaceful and beautiful, Charlie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Charlie Smith
Date: 1/30/2017 9:07:00 PM
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Peace to you Anne-Lise...

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