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Let abundant energies ............... burn Late into the night as ................. the Light of a flickering .................... candle Throws reflected shadows .......... at Mirrored walls, while we ............. both Bathe in pleasure till music .......... ends. -------------------------------------------------- Contest: End Line Word Sponsor: HGarvey Daniel Esquire Placed 1st "Pleasure Seekers burn the candle at both ends."

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Kelly Deschler

Date: 11/14/2015 6:46:00 PM

Your first place win was well deserved, Paul. Congratulations!...This is an excellent poem filled with passion and beautiful lines!

Paul Callus
Date: 11/15/2015 5:55:00 PM

Thank you for the generous comments, Kelly:) Your visit and feedback are honestly appreciated. Regards // paul

James Inman

Date: 11/12/2015 10:39:00 AM

Very Nice Paul. Wonderful night.

Paul Callus
Date: 11/12/2015 11:32:00 AM

Pleased that you like it, James. Thank you for visiting. Regards // paul

Joyce Johnson

Date: 11/8/2015 6:51:00 PM

Fabulously well written. Internet troubles and away from my home have kept me from commenting sooner. Congratulations.

Paul Callus
Date: 11/12/2015 11:29:00 AM

Thank you Joyce. Hope you are keeping well:) I too have computer problems; mine has gone bust and it's in for repairs. Take care. // paul

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/7/2015 3:48:00 PM

Congrats on your end line poem landing on the winners’ page..Way to go!!! Aren’t those end lines impressive..Sara

Paul Callus
Date: 11/12/2015 11:27:00 AM

So pleased that you enjoyed my end-line poem, Sara! Thank you. Yours was also a deserving winner! Regards // paul

Kp Nunez

Date: 11/7/2015 9:42:00 AM

A clever write without losing the poetic touch, Paul. Congrats on your great win! hugs!

Paul Callus
Date: 11/12/2015 11:25:00 AM

Thank you, Kim. Always lovely to have you stopping by:) Excuse the late reply, but my computer is in for repairs...managing quick visits to Soup on borrowed tablet (which is not very user-friendly!). Hugs // paul

Janice Canerdy

Date: 11/5/2015 8:25:00 PM

A 7-plus! Great job--Congratulations, Paul. Janice

Paul Callus
Date: 11/6/2015 9:10:00 AM

Thank you for stopping by, Janice. Both congrats and high rating are appreciated. ~ Regards // paul

Michael Tor

Date: 11/5/2015 2:51:00 PM

Paul congratulations my friend. I have been very busy and missed this winning write of yours. Cleverly done an exceptional write!!!

Paul Callus
Date: 11/6/2015 9:28:00 AM

Thank you very much, Michael! Your visits are always a source of encouragement. Yes, I've heard that you've been busy, both with work and the band! Wishing you all the best, my friend. // paul

Skat A

Date: 11/5/2015 12:13:00 PM

Paul, Congratulations on your End Line Win. LOVE SKAT Super creative

Paul Callus
Date: 11/5/2015 1:45:00 PM

So pleased that you like it, Skat! Thank you for your continuous support. Hugs // paul

Heather Ober

Date: 11/5/2015 11:05:00 AM

This is an extremely creative and clever take on this form! Congrats on your very well-deserved win. A fav for me :)

Paul Callus
Date: 11/5/2015 11:43:00 AM

Thank you, Heather, for your generous and lovely comments! The fav is also much appreciated. // Have just read your haibun...awesome offering!:) ~ Warm regards // paul

Emmanuel Brian Oule

Date: 11/5/2015 2:11:00 AM

Wow, cute, i love this Poem, Congs Paul,

Paul Callus
Date: 11/5/2015 11:41:00 AM

So pleased that you like it, Bryan! Thank you. All the best. // paul

Eve Roper

Date: 11/5/2015 12:01:00 AM

Wow!!! Very creative, Paul, congratulations on your win!

Paul Callus
Date: 11/5/2015 10:46:00 AM

Thank you, Eve! Your romantic poem was a worthy entry, too. hugs // paul

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 11/4/2015 10:43:00 PM

Wow a true romantic write Paul..a must top winner and so it is.. huge congrats! Superb imagery!

Paul Callus
Date: 11/5/2015 10:48:00 AM

Many thanks, Upma! Wowed by your lovely comments:) ~ All the best. // paul

Sandra Haight

Date: 11/4/2015 7:43:00 PM

Great End Line Word poem, Paul! Awesome imagery! Congrats on your fine First Place win! Sandra

Paul Callus
Date: 11/5/2015 10:53:00 AM

Thank you, Sandra! You too are a deserved winner ... blessed with children...and grandchildren:) ~ Regards // paul

Elis Artis

Date: 11/4/2015 6:40:00 PM

Congratulations on the well-deserved win

Paul Callus
Date: 11/5/2015 11:03:00 AM

Thank you, Elis; both your visit and congrats are appreciated. // paul

Edward Ebbs

Date: 11/4/2015 2:46:00 PM

Congrats on your win Paul :)

Paul Callus
Date: 11/4/2015 3:46:00 PM

Thank you, Edward. ~ Regards // paul

Balveen Cheema

Date: 11/4/2015 11:56:00 AM

Paul, a wondrous win! Congrats!

Paul Callus
Date: 11/4/2015 12:39:00 PM

Thank you, Balveen! Pleased to see you on the winners' list, too. Regards // paul

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/4/2015 10:33:00 AM

Gorgeous piece! Congratulations!

Paul Callus
Date: 11/4/2015 12:40:00 PM

Pleased that you like it, Richard. Thank you! ~ Regards // paul

Neva Romaine

Date: 11/4/2015 10:32:00 AM

Hey Paul, a hearty congratulations on your winning poem in the contest! I love the imagery and the way you formed this poem. Be Blessed, Neva

Paul Callus
Date: 11/4/2015 1:17:00 PM

Many thanks, Neva! Your congrats and lovely comments are truly appreciated. ~ All the best. // paul

Samiha Zubair

Date: 11/4/2015 10:32:00 AM

Congratulations, a mighty write

Paul Callus
Date: 11/4/2015 1:15:00 PM

Very kind of you, Samiha...thank you! ~ Regards // paul

Mark Woods

Date: 11/4/2015 10:28:00 AM

Congrats on your win, in what was a very difficult challenge

Paul Callus
Date: 11/4/2015 1:14:00 PM

Yes, Mark; it's not an easy form; luck was on my side! Thank you for a welcome visit. // paul

Jan Allison

Date: 11/4/2015 10:04:00 AM

Dropping back with my congrats Paul:-) hugs jan xx

Jan Allison
Date: 11/4/2015 2:38:00 PM

rain here and cold:-( hugs jan xx

Paul Callus
Date: 11/4/2015 1:12:00 PM

Thank you, Jan. Always pleased to have you stopping by:) {Been a lovely warm day....but I won't rub it in:)} Hugs // paul

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 9/3/2015 1:25:00 AM

A lovely and an excellent write.......good luck........A.M.

Paul Callus
Date: 9/3/2015 2:28:00 AM

Thank you Afolabi for coming back for a second read! All the best. // paul

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/2/2015 9:39:00 PM

Paul, this is awesome and creative. I Just like how it reads... LINDA

Paul Callus
Date: 9/3/2015 2:26:00 AM

Thank you Linda! I am pleased that you like it...love your comments:) All the best....hugs // paul

Neva Romaine

Date: 9/2/2015 3:10:00 PM

Hey Paul, stopped by for a visit. This is a wonderful poem. So creative in the story telling and imagery. Best wishes in the contest too! Be Blessed, Neva

Paul Callus
Date: 9/2/2015 4:15:00 PM

Thank you for reading and enjoying, Neva! Love your nice comments:) Take care & blessings. // paul

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/2/2015 1:40:00 PM

Creative way to go for the contest..I enjyed reading this one..Thanks for the visit to my page with contest..Sometimes we do burn the candle at both ends and in the middle we fall apart..Sara

Paul Callus
Date: 9/2/2015 2:15:00 PM

Thank you Sara! Glad you enjoyed...and the final comment put a smile on my face:) A burnout could be a likely outcome! ~ All the best. // paul