Pleasure Prophecy

hands on curve of hips
head bent close to my navel
tongue in omphalic orbit
waiting for that dip
your prophecy of pleasure
makes of me a believer

Jade Celeste
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Robinson Jr. Avatar
December 8, 2016 at 9:43 PM
Very artfully done, Eileen. Within the bounds of decorum, you displayed a very sensual image of love. Beautiful poem no doubt. Love always.
Callus Avatar
November 24, 2016 at 12:24 PM
Hi Eileen, back again after being away with one cold on top of another. I love this tactfully projected and suggestive image. Hugs // paul
Lamoureux Avatar
November 4, 2016 at 8:09 AM
Dropping by with a hug.
B. Avatar
October 30, 2016 at 10:16 PM
Your poem oozes sensuality. I admire your talent for writing such beautiful pieces :)
Dietrich Avatar
October 30, 2016 at 6:37 PM
very sexy, Eileen. And so tactfully done!! Love it!
Turner Avatar
October 30, 2016 at 11:36 AM
There are so many things I want to say but I won't. Whew!!!A delicious write, Eileen!
Manassian Avatar
October 30, 2016 at 2:57 PM
Awwww....now I'll never know! Thanks for using that adjective though. I'm glad it was to your taste.
Smith Avatar
October 30, 2016 at 10:15 AM
Passion erupts...done tastefully
Manassian Avatar
October 30, 2016 at 2:58 PM
You can't know how much that means, Tim. I like my work to be tasteful and not vulgar. I will not stop writing of passion. It fuels my heat. Blessings.
Lamoureux Avatar
October 30, 2016 at 8:26 AM
Ooh la la! You tell the future beautifully.
Manassian Avatar
October 30, 2016 at 2:59 PM
Thanks, Richard. Always a pleasure to get that Ooh la la! :)
Trifiatis Avatar
October 30, 2016 at 3:49 AM
...and lead us not into temptation.. ..! One to resist such an image one has to be either wise or a saint and I am neither! Have mercy dear Eileen ! Haha! A seven.
Manassian Avatar
October 30, 2016 at 3:09 PM
Dear poet....Your comment in itself is a beautiful testament to your heart. :) So many claim to be saints...Thanks for the visit. ;) Bless your heart. Hugs
Lamoureux Avatar
October 30, 2016 at 8:22 AM
Ha ha, your response brought a smile.
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