Pleasure Prophecy

hands on curve of hips
head bent close to my navel
tongue in omphalic orbit
waiting for that dip
your prophecy of pleasure
makes of me a believer

Jade Celeste
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Date: 12/8/2016 9:43:00 PM
Very artfully done, Eileen. Within the bounds of decorum, you displayed a very sensual image of love. Beautiful poem no doubt. Love always.
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Date: 11/24/2016 12:24:00 PM
Hi Eileen, back again after being away with one cold on top of another. I love this tactfully projected and suggestive image. Hugs // paul
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Date: 11/4/2016 8:09:00 AM
Dropping by with a hug.
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Date: 10/30/2016 10:16:00 PM
Your poem oozes sensuality. I admire your talent for writing such beautiful pieces :)
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Date: 10/30/2016 6:37:00 PM
very sexy, Eileen. And so tactfully done!! Love it!
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Date: 10/30/2016 11:36:00 AM
There are so many things I want to say but I won't. Whew!!!A delicious write, Eileen!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/30/2016 2:57:00 PM
Awwww....now I'll never know! Thanks for using that adjective though. I'm glad it was to your taste.
Date: 10/30/2016 10:15:00 AM
Passion erupts...done tastefully
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/30/2016 2:58:00 PM
You can't know how much that means, Tim. I like my work to be tasteful and not vulgar. I will not stop writing of passion. It fuels my heat. Blessings.
Date: 10/30/2016 8:26:00 AM
Ooh la la! You tell the future beautifully.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/30/2016 2:59:00 PM
Thanks, Richard. Always a pleasure to get that Ooh la la! :)
Date: 10/30/2016 3:49:00 AM
...and lead us not into temptation.. ..! One to resist such an image one has to be either wise or a saint and I am neither! Have mercy dear Eileen ! Haha! A seven.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/30/2016 3:09:00 PM
Dear poet....Your comment in itself is a beautiful testament to your heart. :) So many claim to be saints...Thanks for the visit. ;) Bless your heart. Hugs
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/30/2016 8:22:00 AM
Ha ha, your response brought a smile.
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