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Beautiful forest Hiking with brave friends I trust I hopscotch across River rock, slippery moss Fell on my butt, soaking wet I'm such a dumb klutz Everyone laughs their guts off Wow! That hurt my butt Screwed up. No clothes I regret Walked around soaking wet By: Eve Roper 1/14/2015

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Date: 2/1/2015 1:27:00 PM
These two tankas have been a real pleasure to read! Most of us relate to funny things like this; when young we do not stop to think twice, and then we have to pay the consequences:) Congrats on your podium win, Eve!
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Eve Roper
Date: 2/1/2015 2:00:00 PM
Thank you, Paul, It was fun while it lasted, but those slippery rocks or hard on the ?
Date: 1/29/2015 2:16:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Eve - still made me chuckle when I read it again:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/29/2015 2:51:00 PM
Thank you, Jan. I do love you dropping by. Hugs Eve
Date: 1/29/2015 11:38:00 AM
Congrats Eve on win. Love>rajat
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Date: 1/29/2015 12:49:00 PM
Thank you, Rajat, your poem was incredible. Hugs Eve
Date: 1/21/2015 7:59:00 AM
O Eve your masterstroke in this Tanka "No clothes I regret Walked around soaking wet" ooo a real pleasure hike I can relate to. I can sense every word of your poem. Adding it to my favlist. a 7. Love to you and Sonny. Your friend Rajat
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Eve Roper
Date: 1/21/2015 8:39:00 AM
Thank you, Rajat, those days of fun and pleasure I truly miss. The older we get we watch where we step never know what is going to happen. Blessings and hugs dear friend to you and your family
Date: 1/20/2015 2:52:00 PM
Haha! Can relate to your experience. Thanks for stopping by. / M
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Date: 1/20/2015 3:35:00 PM
Thank you, Maurice, it was funny but smart.
Date: 1/15/2015 3:33:00 AM
Isn't that the way? Great tanka.
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Eve Roper
Date: 1/15/2015 8:44:00 AM
M.L. Kiser, thank you for your compliment. Dumb things always happen if one is not careful. Blessings my friend
Date: 1/14/2015 11:15:00 PM
Made me smile! great!
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Date: 1/15/2015 8:45:00 AM
Thank you, Arthur, it did what it was suppose to do. Blessings my friend
Date: 1/14/2015 4:24:00 PM
I bet that hurt not just your butt but also your pride..I'm glad you can look back and laugh...hugs Tim
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Date: 1/14/2015 5:41:00 PM
Now I can laugh, Tim, I'm not the sharpest crayon in the box like my son tells me. Blessings and hugs sir
Date: 1/14/2015 11:53:00 AM
OUCH! This made me giggle Eve:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 1/14/2015 12:00:00 PM
Jan, I was in my 30’s at the time. I was so embarrassed, that really hurt, it was one of our gold dredging hikes with friend an out of town relatives. You get so brave and don’t realize the consequences. Blessings and happiness for you and your family