Pleassseeee - Don'T Reach For the Just For Men

I have a huge confession guys – here’s what I have to say
I have a real thing about a man who is just turning grey
Just find the look of the greying locks to be so distinguished 
So don’t reach for the ‘Just for Men’ or my passion will be extinguished 


2nd April 2014
~Submitted to Black Eyed Susan's' 5 lines or less contest~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 4/8/2014 10:21:00 AM
I'll retrieve a little from the headboard and let you know what colour it is , lol Another classic Jan.
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Jan Allison
Date: 4/8/2014 10:42:00 AM
I await your reply with baited breath! The grey had to be natural you cant use a spray can to achieve this look lol hugs Jan x
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Jan Allison
Date: 4/8/2014 10:40:00 AM
TMI Darren lol Hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/2/2014 10:32:00 PM
Yes, a TOUCH of grey. But it quickly goes to full grey. My hair is gonna be going that way soon too. YIKES. I sure enjoyed this one.
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Jan Allison
Date: 4/3/2014 1:41:00 AM
Thanks Andrea - women tend to cover it up .... thankfully men don't - mmmmmm. lol Jan xxxx
Date: 4/2/2014 11:25:00 AM
I've got a lot more salt than pepper! Do I still qualify! LOL You are making a big impact here on the Soup... everybody love ya! Way to go sis... keep 'em coming! Big big squeezy hugs from your cyber bro XOXOX
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Jan Allison
Date: 4/2/2014 12:22:00 PM
In the words of Billy Joel 'I love you just the way you are' grey hair white hair on no hair Jack you inspire me and I'm blessed to have found my cyber twin brother. love and hugs Jan xxx
Date: 4/2/2014 4:55:00 AM
JAN JAN JAN!! You are ON THE MONEY with this one. I find the salt and pepper look SUCH a turn on! :) I know...I know!!! Andrea Bocelli...Pierce Brosnon....need I say more? Glad I read this one... :)
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Date: 4/2/2014 5:30:00 AM
Thanks for the lovely comments Eileen got a huge smile on my face for some reason lol Got a couple of Andrea CD's next best thing to the real thing I suppose and we can dream can't we! Hugs Jan xx
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/2/2014 5:27:00 AM
YES!!! That locks and the grizzled look! NOT clean shaven...NO...I love to rub my cheeks against a man who FEELS like a man, so George Clooney...yes! I do prefer Pierce though. HA HA! This gave me a good laugh. After teaching four language classes straight, I sure needed it. YES YES Bocelli....he is on tour in the STATES!! WHY? WHY IS LIFE SO UNFAIR! ;) Going to learn Italian!
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Jan Allison
Date: 4/2/2014 5:02:00 AM
MMMMMMMM So you know where I am coming from Eileen. Oh Andrea Bocelli that voice and those locks - got his CD in my car may be singing in Italian but who cares I'm in heaven lol - you forgot Mr Swoony George Clooney lol Your comment sure made me Smile. Jan xxx
Date: 4/1/2014 7:51:00 PM
Fantastic Jan, Peter is practically white and I have a few grey hairs, I love that can't wait for Pete to read it........Vera.............
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Date: 4/2/2014 2:44:00 AM
Lol thanks Vera - its just they look so distinguished - ohhhhh don't get me started am laughing and blushing here. lol Jan xxxxxxx
Date: 4/1/2014 6:40:00 PM
Hey Jan, How do you feel about ' White' hair, lol Great job.
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Date: 4/1/2014 6:45:00 PM
Hi Jerry - definitely not as tasty as the grey but I suppose one leads to the other in the end lol
Date: 4/1/2014 6:29:00 PM
Haha....My daughter teases me about my gray hairs...Tim
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Jan Allison
Date: 4/1/2014 6:30:00 PM
Oh Tim - don't cover them up everrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr lol hugs Jan xxx
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