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Please Place Patience Upon My Palms

Why can’t you just be evil? Like my mind
wants you to be: Unfaithful, shameful.
I want to hate you! But you’re too kind
and no matter you are always thankful
of me and my song of desperation
for pain and its un-winnable future.
I know! A heart’s betrayal may come
disguised as death bringing this return 
to memory of past regret, unyielding
regret, this plan of me my only way out.
Understand unending and what may be.
Believe in the certainty of two hearts.
Trust in the flesh and the way it feels
on fingertips, lips... Trust love—it is real.

Reinvent, Reimagine, Revamp! 
JustThatArchaicPoet Contest
Poem chose “Knock, Knock”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 11/8/2013 9:37:00 AM
that's a very nice expressed poem Thanks for sharing it, God bless you, Erich
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Date: 11/8/2013 8:11:00 AM
ooo Mike, what a request, greatly expressed. love is real.... xox..Linda
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