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Earlier I left a message to move a suspect bag The one abandoned where I park my jag I caught a whiff and most disgusted did gag The offensive item must belong to Bag Lady Mag I see her daily dressed in the same dirty stinky rag With frumpy socks around her knees that sag She’s really pretty sweet though I feel like such a nag AP: Honorable Mention 2020 Posted on February 28, 2019

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Date: 3/1/2019 4:06:00 AM
I love a much-needed monorhyme, Line. They are my FAVORITEs, and this is too.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/1/2019 8:35:00 AM
Thanks for your visit, Caren.

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