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Please Make This Last

Please make this last forever, Dear, and bid the moon not disappear. For when it does, then like a brash, will come the light of day to dash this night as soft as warm cashmere. You say sweet words and are sincere, but love can die and leave a gash, and passion’s sure to turn to ash. . . Please make this last. I touch your face. . . you are so near that as I whisper in your ear, I see upon your cheek a lash. Now make a wish, and in a flash I’ll have it off! Dear, ease my fear - Please make this last! Feb. 14, 2014. Now for Janice Canerdy's "Give Me a Rondeau" Contest

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Date: 11/20/2017 3:36:00 PM
A lovely, endearing poem, Andrea. Congrats on your win in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 11/20/2017 11:08:00 AM
Your Rondeau speaks excellence...Wonderful to share the winners’ list with you...Congrats on your placement..Sara
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Date: 11/13/2017 5:49:00 AM
Wow! A great rondeau, Andrea, congratulations:)
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Date: 11/12/2017 5:47:00 PM
Beautifully penned Andrea...Congrats on your win
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Date: 11/12/2017 7:53:00 AM
Andrea, such a beautiful rondeau, congrats on your win. John
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Date: 11/12/2017 4:07:00 AM
Lovely Andrea. I don't believe true love dies, but I do believe we sometimes kill it.
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Date: 11/12/2017 12:23:00 AM
Thank you for entering your GREAT poem in my contest, Andrea. Congratulations on your well-deserved win. Janice
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Date: 11/12/2017 12:23:00 AM
Thank you for entering your GREAT poem in my contest, Andrea. Congratulations on your well-deserved win. Janice
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Date: 6/3/2014 7:01:00 AM
the sweet lovely pleading and longing of a woman here.... lovely write.... :) the third stanza shows the softness a woman's love has
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Date: 5/14/2014 10:40:00 PM
Sounds like a vunerable woman in this poem. She wants it to last. love phyl
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Date: 3/14/2014 7:22:00 AM
I admire this poem and the form.
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Date: 3/1/2014 9:26:00 AM
I can see why this one made the winners list. You are so talented Andrea.
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Date: 2/28/2014 9:01:00 AM
This gal doesn't sound too sure of her man. Tell her she is terribly vulnerable. Good stuff, Andrea. Love, daver
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Date: 2/26/2014 6:22:00 PM
Andrea, Congratulations, on your win, thank you for sharing, and helping the reader Feel The emotions of Love through your poem. ~SKAT~
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Date: 2/21/2014 8:17:00 PM
Lovely poem Andrea, written on the perfect day. Take care. Congratulations.
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Date: 2/21/2014 9:12:00 AM
I so enjoyed the thoughts in this poem. We usually sense when it's not going to last, which makes the fire burn much more intensely, pleasure and pain. I've gone 68 years w/o knowing the fallen lash wish. Can you believe it? Congratulations!
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Date: 2/21/2014 4:08:00 AM
Wonderful Andrea !! Congrats on win !!
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Date: 2/21/2014 3:57:00 AM
Enjoyed reading it, Congrats, Andrea!!
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Date: 2/21/2014 3:19:00 AM
Enjoyed reading this wonderful poem, congrats.................
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Date: 2/19/2014 11:07:00 PM
This is very good. I enjoyed reading it this night. I do hope it lasts.... Lucilla
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Date: 2/19/2014 8:05:00 PM
Congrats on the win Andrea.A great work you did here.
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Date: 2/19/2014 6:46:00 PM
I had a feeling this one was yours, andrea! I'm definitely 'feeling the love' in this, and all words and punctuation are placed to perfection as always! congrats on your win, my friend :)
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Date: 2/18/2014 11:15:00 PM
Ditto what Gail has stated just below.
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Date: 2/18/2014 11:26:00 AM
Very nice feeling of a very nice heart. Love is on boom. Very sweetly worded, my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
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Date: 2/18/2014 11:04:00 AM
This has got an awesome flow! So easy..and enjoyable to read.
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