Beautiful Scars Poet Rhyme

Please Love, Come Over Here

Vizualize, Scrutunize and Remark-Poetry Contest
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Please love, stay over there, while I stay posed on your chair.
Look at me with those deep brown eyes, as I take off my disguise.
My beauty for you is reserved, I'll show you the passion you deserve.
My tiny cami calls your name, as I wish for you to do the same.

Please love, stay over there, I feel your ecstasy as you sit and stare.
I know you've craved my adoration, while I crave your exploration.
Our concupiscent world of magic, has saved me from a life so tragic.
The desirous nature of our togetherness, has made us so powerless.

Please love, come over here...let's soar freely through our atmosphere.


~Date Written: March 3, 2016~

1st Place Winner

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Jean Murray March 20, 2016 at 12:58 AM Fantastic. I see him drooling.

Balveen Cheema March 17, 2016 at 8:45 AM Congrats on your top placement, Laura! Beautiful Scars March 17, 2016 at 9:59 AM Thank you very much Balveen :)-luloo

Teddy Kimathi March 17, 2016 at 3:47 AM Sensual, deep, emotional, adrenaline catalyst... Congrats Laura, for your well, deserved first placement in the contest!!! ;-) Beautiful Scars March 17, 2016 at 9:58 AM Many thanks Teddy :)-luloo

Dr. Upma A. Sharma March 16, 2016 at 11:07 PM Awesome heartfelt write Laura.. congrats on much deserved top podium. Beautiful Scars March 17, 2016 at 9:58 AM Thank you Dr. Upma :)-luloo

Charlie Smith March 16, 2016 at 8:00 PM Congratulations Luloo, well deserved... Beautiful Scars March 16, 2016 at 9:33 PM Thank you very much Charlie..:)-luloo

Sam Jameson March 16, 2016 at 6:46 PM I like this angle-- it has that element of, "no, no...yes!" to it. Well done luloo, congrats on top spot :) Beautiful Scars March 16, 2016 at 9:32 PM Many thanks Sam :)-luloo

Sandra Haight March 16, 2016 at 6:41 PM Nice interpretation, Laura! Congrats on your First Place win! Hugs, Sandra Beautiful Scars March 16, 2016 at 9:32 PM Thank you very much Sandra :)-luloo

Lin Lane March 16, 2016 at 5:11 PM Well done and congratulations, Laura. Beautiful Scars March 16, 2016 at 5:51 PM Thank you Lin :)-luloo

Rob Carmack March 16, 2016 at 5:07 PM I like the expansion from the poem, with the color of the eyes and the saving from tragic. Congrats. Beautiful Scars March 16, 2016 at 5:08 PM Thank you very much Rob...:)-luloo

Janice Canerdy March 16, 2016 at 4:55 PM Congratulations on your well-deserved top win, Laura! Janice Beautiful Scars March 16, 2016 at 4:57 PM Thank you very much Janice -luloo :)

Richard Lamoureux March 16, 2016 at 4:54 PM Very Sexy Laura, congrats on your top spot! Beautiful Scars March 16, 2016 at 4:55 PM Thank you very much Richard -luloo :)

Hafssa Aj March 16, 2016 at 4:42 PM great poem , congrats on your placement :) Laura Loo Beautiful Scars March 16, 2016 at 4:49 PM Many thanks Hassan :)-luloo

Stephen Pennell March 16, 2016 at 4:11 PM ooh are miss'es very good, deserved win congrats Beautiful Scars March 16, 2016 at 4:27 PM Thank you Stephen... :)-luloo

Daniel Turner March 16, 2016 at 3:12 PM Hey congratulations, Laura on your prize winning write:) So seductive. Once again love conquers all! Peace sweet lady:) Beautiful Scars March 16, 2016 at 4:27 PM Thank you DT..:)-luloo

Brian Mcclain March 16, 2016 at 2:49 PM Hi Laura, Congratulations on your win with this great poetic personification of love. Plus I learned a new word today: concupiscent / concupiscence! Cheers, Brian Beautiful Scars March 16, 2016 at 4:26 PM Thank you Brian :) -luloo

Jeannie Cronin March 12, 2016 at 2:42 PM This one allows the imagination to soar freely. Best of luck in the contest!

Constance La France March 5, 2016 at 4:00 PM Laura, I really like where you took this theme, what I saw as fear, you saw as desire, a winner to me, I was lost in your poem and so I must love this 7 ~ Beautiful Scars March 6, 2016 at 8:55 PM thank you sweet lady :) -Luloo *smiles* thanks*

Gordon Mcconnell March 3, 2016 at 1:51 PM Nicely penned piece Laura, catches the mood so well, so romantic and loving! Beautiful Scars March 3, 2016 at 2:00 PM Thanks Gordon :)-luloo

Frederic Parker March 3, 2016 at 11:17 AM You captured a moment in time that the participants would cherish/ good luck in the contest Beautiful Scars March 3, 2016 at 11:19 AM Thank you Frederic :)-luloo

Daniel Turner March 3, 2016 at 10:20 AM Forgive me, Laura. I skipped right by the photo in haste to get to your poem. I did not even notice it was a contest write. It is still a great write but just in a different context. Peace my friend and forgive the faux pas:) Beautiful Scars March 3, 2016 at 10:34 AM No worries silly it's all good :) -luloo *smiles*

Daniel Turner March 3, 2016 at 10:10 AM Very romantic, Laura. The love you share is expressed well in this poem. Peace to you dear friend:) Beautiful Scars March 3, 2016 at 10:11 AM Thank You:)-luloo