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Please Join Me In My Dreams

Come and go away with me and join me in this fantasy to distant lands beyond the clouds where we can share a life so free. no storm clouds looming to disrupt no one close by to interrupt just you and me beneath the stars as solitude let’s life erupt beneath the stars we’ll spend the night while bathing in the moon’s pale light just clinging close until the morn enjoying moments of delight and in the morn a bright sun rise as purple pink lights up the skies the morning mist lifts in the air revealing beauty to our eyes into the air the sea gulls soar and wing their way along the shore just floating on the ocean breeze we’ll soar with them for evermore the ocean breeze blows in our hair our skin sun kissed, our feet are bare our footprints in the pure white sand while strolling on a beach so fair on pure white sand by ocean blue beneath clear skies our lives renew as all our worries fade away we’ll spend forever just we two so won’t you come away with me and join me in this fantasy to distant lands beyond the stars where we can live forever free. October 3, 2019

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Date: 2/26/2021 6:36:00 AM
This is just dreamy John ;) I like the form and you've really made it sing! Congratulations on the win! Linda
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John Gondolf
Date: 2/27/2021 3:44:00 AM
Thank you so much, Linda, I appreciate it, I hope all is well in East Texas. John
Date: 2/26/2021 1:07:00 AM
Freedom is beautiful...Congrats on your win John :)
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John Gondolf
Date: 2/27/2021 3:40:00 AM
Thank you for your comments, Carol, I appreciate it. John
Date: 2/25/2021 4:00:00 PM
A perfect fantasy, who can resist. Thank you for joining John. Congrats on your win.
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John Gondolf
Date: 2/27/2021 3:34:00 AM
Thank you so much for your comments and for hosting the contest. John
Date: 12/16/2019 11:27:00 AM
I think that is a place I would love to join you in. Great write . I don't generally like long poems but this one I could not stop reading. Glad I did. - Mike
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John Gondolf
Date: 12/16/2019 12:12:00 PM
Thanks, Mike, I appreciate your comments. I normally don't write long poems but this one just seemed to keep flowing as I was writing. Thanks for taking the time to read it. John
Date: 12/15/2019 2:51:00 PM
a lovely one of yours I did not yet see. Congrats in Brian's contest with this.
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John Gondolf
Date: 12/16/2019 8:34:00 AM
Thank you so much, Andrea. This was my first attempt at a Rubaiyat, I'm glad you liked it. Hugs, John
Date: 11/24/2019 1:22:00 AM
A beautiful poem, one to read over and over again thank you
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John Gondolf
Date: 11/24/2019 6:30:00 AM
Thank for so much, Shirley, I’m glad you enjoyed it. John
Date: 10/10/2019 6:23:00 AM
Beautiful write, John; I was there on that Island. Love this poem. Splendid poetry!
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John Gondolf
Date: 10/13/2019 10:52:00 AM
Thanks so much, Joe, I appreciate it. John
Date: 10/8/2019 9:30:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful creativity, John.. So magical I feel as if I'm there, my friend.. An exquisite write!! A fav for me.. Have a blessed day!
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John Gondolf
Date: 10/8/2019 6:34:00 PM
Thank you so much, Robertina, I glad you could join me in my little fantasy. And thank you for the fav! Hugs, John
Date: 10/6/2019 2:25:00 PM
John this is so beautifully written, you have certainly taken me on a journey with your dreamy words :-) x
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John Gondolf
Date: 10/6/2019 2:38:00 PM
Thank you so much, Elaine, I'm glad you enjoyed my little fantasy. All the best my friend. Hugs, John
Date: 10/6/2019 12:04:00 PM
O, John! This is gorgeous. Truly perfectly penned in such a wondrous style (rubaiyat). Absolute FAVE for me. Bravo! Was it poem of the day? And if not, why not?!! Thanks, Gershon
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John Gondolf
Date: 10/6/2019 12:22:00 PM
Thanks so much, Gershon, I'm glad you enjoyed it. And thanks for the FAVE. This is the first Rubaiyat I've written, I like the way it came out. All the best my friend. John
Date: 10/4/2019 2:34:00 PM
So romantic and absolutely charming and enticing - a touch of magic in your verses - I certainly will fav. this poem. Hugs, Jenn.
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John Gondolf
Date: 10/4/2019 3:52:00 PM
Thank you so much, Jenn, I'm glad you liked it. and thank you for saving it as a fav! All the best my dear friend. Hugs, John
Date: 10/4/2019 12:43:00 PM
Your skillful pen has allowed us to travel with you in your dream and we are all better off for the moments journey.
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John Gondolf
Date: 10/4/2019 4:05:00 PM
Thank you , Kenneth, I appreciate your thoughts and comments. John
Date: 10/3/2019 3:55:00 PM
"beyond the clouds" Moments are magical. In so many amazing ways. Just sayin', my dear friend. Anything is possible in a Dream, or in a Fantasy. This is so beautiful and romantic. Your thoughts bring a smile. :) Brandy
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John Gondolf
Date: 10/4/2019 4:16:00 AM
Moments are always magical in our fantasies, B, perhaps that is why they are called fantasies. If only real life was that easy. All the best to you my dear friend. Hugs, John
Date: 10/3/2019 12:22:00 PM
This is gorgeous and its sentiment emotional moves me, calling me away. Great writing, John. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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John Gondolf
Date: 10/3/2019 10:11:00 PM
Thank you, CayCay, I’m glad you enjoyed my whimsical dream. Hugs, John
Date: 10/3/2019 11:33:00 AM
I'm sure you will have a lot of applicants...a wonderful invitation to offer...
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John Gondolf
Date: 10/3/2019 10:00:00 PM
Thanks, Arturo, I appreciate it. John
Date: 10/3/2019 11:01:00 AM
your dreams sound like the perfect getaway....i love the beach of all things... beautiful penning John :) hugs
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John Gondolf
Date: 10/3/2019 9:57:00 PM
Thank you, Sandy, I’m glad you enjoyed this. Hugs, John
Date: 10/3/2019 8:25:00 AM
Very nice John. Peaceful and freeing :)
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John Gondolf
Date: 10/3/2019 9:17:00 AM
Thank you, Heidi, I appreciate it. Hugs, John

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