Please Find Me

Please Find Me…

Within my mind, I am nowhere; please find me.
   I am somewhere with grey despair; please find me.
When you’re searching within the crowd, I am lost.
   No matter where I am not there, please find me.
I am so lost; within my thoughts, I am gone!
   Show me that love because you care; please find me.
Where is this place? I am drowning, can you see?
   No more dismay, I want some air, please find me.
Thinking of love is not for me; it’s just wrong!
   I am too old to think of care; please find me.
The door is closed, the night is dark, desires gone.
   Yet I see you, to God I swear, please find me.
You let me go when I was young; now it’s late.
   I can be found, just ask me where, please find me.
With all my soul, with all my love, I am yours.
   You have so much, nothing to share; please find me.
Tell me “Haloo” where is this place, to be found.
   The truth is there; my love is fair; please find me.



3/17/16 Haloo
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J.T. Avatar
May 30, 2017 at 9:49 PM
very nice -JT
Salehi Avatar
May 30, 2017 at 11:38 PM
Honestly JT you are so welcome
Downing  Avatar
February 5, 2017 at 2:34 PM
I really love this piece. It's brilliantly beautiful :)
Salehi Avatar
February 6, 2017 at 2:03 AM
Thank you Akkina....
Jordan Avatar
August 24, 2016 at 10:17 PM
Well written, I like it. DC
Salehi Avatar
August 28, 2016 at 1:25 AM
Thank you DC
Bankson Avatar
June 15, 2016 at 11:18 PM
Pay no attention to that please...Should have simply said''Thank You''
Salehi Avatar
June 16, 2016 at 1:14 AM
THANK YOU for stopping by........
Bankson Avatar
June 15, 2016 at 11:15 PM
??????
La France Avatar
April 8, 2016 at 9:32 AM
Pashang, I liked your poem very much, nicely done ~
Salehi Avatar
April 8, 2016 at 1:54 PM
Thanks Broken wings, you are so kind.....Pashang
Dietrich Avatar
March 31, 2016 at 8:54 PM
wow, pashang. How many of this type of poetry do you have? You look like a pro with it here!!
Salehi Avatar
April 1, 2016 at 4:32 AM
My dearest Andrea, Ghazal must be spiritual or about love, otherwise is not ghazal. Although, it started in Arabia, but Persians perfected it. I am not a Pro , but I have six books of poetry all in Ghazal and masnavi. If you know how to read Farsi, I'll send the link. Happy Norooz!
Smith Avatar
March 30, 2016 at 10:05 AM
A great introspection my friend...excellent write
Salehi Avatar
March 30, 2016 at 1:20 PM
Thanks Tim, you're always kind with your comments. To me this piece is more extrospection than introspection. Nevertheless, thank you, it is my other half "Haloo" that is constantly seeking ....
Turner Avatar
March 30, 2016 at 8:18 AM
You are not that old!. I will find you, someday!. Love the write. Peace my friend:)
Salehi Avatar
March 30, 2016 at 1:23 PM
Thanks DT, age is something relative. I feel old. Thanks anyway... we know each other for millenniums.
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