Please Do Better Please Fix This World

We did not try as hard as we could
We got staid and stodgy and old and stale
We gave up after awhile
When we discovered our votes counted less than others
Discouraged, depressed, disappointing ourselves.
We are sorry, child, we truly are very very very very sorry.
Please do better. Please fix the world. 

We lost faith in humanity, as we got hooked on screens.
TV’s, I-pads, Kindles, I-pods, tablets, I-phones and other machines
We forgot to be a family, lost our smiles, did not celebrate or talk.
We began to text, even in anger, sitting next to each other 
As we typed out our irritation in a squawk.
Sad, sorry, alone, living in determined isolation next to each other.
We are sorry, child, we truly are very very very very sorry.
Please do better. Please fix the world. 

We were the hippies, the beatniks, the lovers, the peacemakers
But we were also the ones sent to a swamp in Viet Nam,
Fodder, who were not supposed to get back,
We lived through assassinations of great men, 
We saw JFK get shot in the head ten times a day in 1963 on TV.
We watched Jack Ruby kill Oswald, 
We saw the four darling little girls who got bombed at Sunday school
We lost our hope, our humanity, our innocence. We lost ourselves.
We are sorry, child, we truly are very very very very sorry.
Please do better. Please fix the world.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 1/2/2021 7:46:00 PM
Being from the same age, I'd like to say not merely that I'm sorry, but that I'm part of the worst generation (ever) -- and that I've finally stopped blaming others for that. (Actually, I stopped blaming others a long time ago, but what the H). The fault lies in ME, MYSELF, and I. ~ No better or worse a narcissist than Donald Trump
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 1/2/2021 10:46:00 PM
I watch what is happening in disbelief every single day!
Date: 1/1/2021 10:42:00 AM
Definitely from the same times. Wonder what happened to so many people who believed in connecting with the world, somehow the 80s took over and money was king. hope people are seeing the need to care for others and the world and hoping the young will a strong and good factor.Take care.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 1/1/2021 2:05:00 PM
You too Linda
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