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Okay...
I've just finished another masterpiece
I go and hit submit
This shouldn't take very long now
Before the comments come rushing in
Okay...
It's been a couple minutes now
And I haven't gotten one
Is there anybody awake at this time
Can't they see what it is I've done
1) Do you think that they still like me?
2) Do they even know I'm here?!
3) Did I post my poem at the right time?!!
4) Did I make the writing clear?!!!
5) Could the site be on the blink?!!!!
6) Are the worlds computers down?!!!!!
7) Did I miss the second coming?!!!!!!
8) Is there anyone around?!!!!!!!!
ARGHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!
Okay...
I'll check it once again
Is this the third or thirtieth time
My mind can not comprehend it
Are all these people blind
Okay...
Now I'm on the check it 30 second cycle
It's a crazy loop I'm spinning in
Pretty sure I wouldn't be here though
If someone would please comment
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