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Okay... I've just finished another masterpiece I go and hit submit This shouldn't take very long now Before the comments come rushing in Okay... It's been a couple minutes now And I haven't gotten one Is there anybody awake at this time Can't they see what it is I've done 1) Do you think that they still like me? 2) Do they even know I'm here?! 3) Did I post my poem at the right time?!! 4) Did I make the writing clear?!!! 5) Could the site be on the blink?!!!! 6) Are the worlds computers down?!!!!! 7) Did I miss the second coming?!!!!!! 8) Is there anyone around?!!!!!!!! ARGHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!! Okay... I'll check it once again Is this the third or thirtieth time My mind can not comprehend it Are all these people blind Okay... Now I'm on the check it 30 second cycle It's a crazy loop I'm spinning in Pretty sure I wouldn't be here though If someone would please comment

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Date: 6/26/2016 4:04:00 PM
Believe in yourself. Even if no one comments. Some masterpieces aren't appreciated until the artist is gone. It takes a monotone society a lifetime to catch on. Keep on keeping on and on and on. Really liked the honesty of wanting to be accepted. If you want to be readily accepted then you truly haven't created a masterpiece.
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Date: 6/25/2016 8:43:00 PM
Boy, can a lot of us relate to this poem Mike! Funny and realistic write…love it!:)
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Date: 6/25/2016 2:07:00 PM
ha ha ha am sure you will get loads of comments on this one Mike - I can sure relate to this poem :-( I just wish soup would go to the old system when we got automatic responses to comments on our poems and comments made :-) hugs Jan xx
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