Mike Hauser Poet I do not know?

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Okay...

I've just finished another masterpiece
I go and hit submit
This shouldn't take very long now
Before the comments come rushing in

Okay...

It's been a couple minutes now
And I haven't gotten one
Is there anybody awake at this time
Can't they see what it is I've done

1) Do you think that they still like me?

2) Do they even know I'm here?!

3) Did I post my poem at the right time?!!

4) Did I make the writing clear?!!!

5) Could the site be on the blink?!!!!

6) Are the worlds computers down?!!!!!

7) Did I miss the second coming?!!!!!!

8) Is there anyone around?!!!!!!!!

         ARGHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!  

Okay...

I'll check it once again
Is this the third or thirtieth time
My mind can not comprehend it
Are all these people blind

Okay...

Now I'm on the check it 30 second cycle
It's a crazy loop I'm spinning in
Pretty sure I wouldn't be here though
If someone would please comment

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Holly Bohto June 26, 2016 at 4:04 PM Believe in yourself. Even if no one comments. Some masterpieces aren't appreciated until the artist is gone. It takes a monotone society a lifetime to catch on. Keep on keeping on and on and on. Really liked the honesty of wanting to be accepted. If you want to be readily accepted then you truly haven't created a masterpiece.

Cheryl Hoffman June 25, 2016 at 8:43 PM Boy, can a lot of us relate to this poem Mike! Funny and realistic write…love it!:)

Jan Allison June 25, 2016 at 2:07 PM ha ha ha am sure you will get loads of comments on this one Mike - I can sure relate to this poem :-( I just wish soup would go to the old system when we got automatic responses to comments on our poems and comments made :-) hugs Jan xx