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Please Be Gentle

Pierced my heart with your love Please be gentle dont stap it, dont drop it i wish to keep it i wish to feel your love for the rest of my life dont make it bleed i dont wish to feel hate

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/28/2010 7:06:00 AM
oh i see and feel this poem
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Date: 12/16/2010 3:20:00 PM
no doubt,hate is a poison...in regards to your comment on my write,the chicken or the egg...even the most simple of writes can have a great quality,sorta like water,plain yet it's greatness is it's neccesity.....peace , jay
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Date: 12/16/2010 2:41:00 PM
You my dear are a very good Poet... love your style...always Michael
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