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Please, Please

Just written this one at work. Any comments welcomed. x Please, Please.... I try so hard to forgive and forget It really isn't easy I want to move on and lose these regrets Find a way to ease me Every where I look I feel reminders of the part of me you took When you went away Still feels like yesterday Please, please, stop torturing me Please stop..... let me move on Please, please, just set me free It's all I'm asking.... now that you've gone I move on with my life hoping today Might be the day I forget Got to be an answer to make this go away I haven't found it yet Every where I look There are reminders of the part of me you took When you went away Still feels like yesterday Please, please, stop torturing me Please stop...... let me move on Please, please, just set me free It's all I'm asking, now that you've gone I'm feeling very tired and always sad I don't need this every day I want to go on, find a way to feel glad Please, please show me the way I don't want reminders of the part of me you took When you went away Still feels like yesterday Please, please, stop torturing me Please stop..... let me move on Please, please, just set me free It's all I'm asking.... now that you've gone Jane Shields?

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Date: 11/14/2017 4:43:00 PM
Sounds like Alabama's Moore who is running for the Senate. Wonder which is worse: the fear or the pain. The both sound very bad. Paranoia could be a side affect.
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Jane Shields
Date: 11/14/2017 5:14:00 PM
It is. Fear, pain, paranoia, apprehension, they all figure. xx
Date: 11/14/2017 4:13:00 PM
When someone has suffered trama through pain, its difficult to forgive amd forget as pain hurts... Me I always forgive but I never forget...Well written Jane.
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Jane Shields
Date: 11/14/2017 4:27:00 PM
Thank you. xx

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