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The gloomiest story bore me back to those days. Profound despair overtook me as I listened endlessly. As I sank, you asked to heed my moving words in agony. This time, it's for someone else's benefit, not mine. To be correctly cured and to agnize how much you listen. I'm merely hoping and praying for a desirable outcome. My reckless burning bled as much as visible emotion. I'm absurdly begging for another chance of motion.
Written: December 19, 2021

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Date: 12/21/2021 1:21:00 AM
"My reckless burning bled as much as visible emotion." Great line, Lasaad.
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Date: 12/20/2021 6:05:00 PM
Beautiful Lasaad. I agree with Vijay here but hear the pleading to return to happy healthier times. Love the pic. God Bless, JB
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Date: 12/20/2021 5:07:00 AM
May your pleadings be heard. I hear the voice of goodwill for others. Well done, Lasaad.
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Date: 12/20/2021 2:44:00 AM
A lovely poem and picture. Well done.
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