Plea To a Globe In the Oven

A little stream of bubbling sizzles, 
Came near my toes and through my fingers.
As I was watching the air flow, 
My heart was racing, then went slow. 
I couldn’t cope with all the stress;
This anxious, noisy, grey regress. 

The aching longing for a breeze,
Even the slight wind of a sneeze,
Would calm the skin and the forehead 
And rinse the heat with chill instead.
If jumping clouds would cure this mood,
And concrete buildings stripped to nude… 

Blow ice drops near the neck, oh Pole!
Cover this rock’s feeble shield’s hole!
Make streets gently slide and noses frost,
Take the breath of the core home at last!
Fly to the far corners of both Norths,
Bombard the middle with freezing slopes!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Brown Avatar
December 23, 2009 at 11:06 AM
Congratulations on making it through the first round of the PoetrySoup Site October Contest. I wish you the best in the finals Luminita. May 2010 be the year you see your writing endeavors become reality. Love and blessings to you and yours always, Carol
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December 23, 2009 at 4:48 AM
Wow!! Esti maestra rimei! Bravos, ma incanta nespus poezia ta si felicitari ca ai rezistat rundei din concurs!! :)) Un craciun fericit tie si familiei tale si fie ca noul an sa ne gaseasca cu tot mai multe poezii fabuloase!! Un An Nou Spumos!! :))
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December 21, 2009 at 9:55 AM
Congrats on your poem winning the first round of PS contest!! Very well deserved, enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry. Here’s wishing you a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!! May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty
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December 20, 2009 at 2:19 PM
Congratulations on moving to the next round with this great poem, Luminita! Wishing you joy and happiness in the New Year, love, Carolyn
Fraser Avatar
December 20, 2009 at 11:17 AM
Many congratulations on reaching the second round with your fine poem >> James
Brown Avatar
November 20, 2009 at 6:57 AM
Congrats on feature poem this week!
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November 18, 2009 at 10:58 AM
Congrats on being featured this week. Rgds Janette
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November 16, 2009 at 9:08 PM
Congratulations on being featured this week. Love, Iolanda
Sheart Avatar
November 16, 2009 at 11:30 AM
Congrats on your feature poem this week! Love Light Patty
Fraser Avatar
November 16, 2009 at 10:34 AM
Many congratulations on your poem being featured this week >> James
Brown Avatar
November 16, 2009 at 5:22 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors. Love, Carol
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November 15, 2009 at 7:01 PM
Nice use of imagery to convey your thoughts. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Enjoy your honor. Wishing you many more. Karen
Brown Avatar
August 4, 2009 at 6:15 AM
Good Morning Luminita. I enjoyed reading your wonderful poem this morning. Love, Carol
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August 3, 2009 at 8:33 PM
beautiful poetry! Luminita! jimbo
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August 3, 2009 at 1:56 PM
Interesting. Sara
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