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Playtime At the Soup!

where I play its safe to say my friends they really care! I try new forms reveal my storms they catch me when I err! don't want to gush! words turn to mush! I even stretch despair! when games get tough I mean really rough they hold me with their cheer! their love allows my muse to rouse and cast out any fear! as you can see I quite agree! I like to play right here!

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James Fraser

Date: 8/30/2009 9:35:00 AM

Chirpy little write this James, kool poem>>James

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 8/27/2009 3:37:00 PM

Yeah, I quite agree. Nice playground indeed. :) A very nice way to put your thoughts in poetry about being on the soup. I too am glad I chose this one. Thank you for sharing and thank you for the nice comments on my poems. Take care, Caroline.

Carrie Richards

Date: 8/27/2009 7:06:00 AM

Aptly described...!! This is a playground for poets!! What a fun description!!!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/27/2009 6:23:00 AM

Nicely written to soup friends. Keep writing. Sara

Farah Chamma

Date: 8/27/2009 6:15:00 AM

That's a very sweet poem...it certainly speaks to all Soupers...Thank you for sharing.. Farah

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/27/2009 5:22:00 AM

We love to have you here for playtime Jim. You are such a player. Oh sorry that's a different story. ~~Smiles~~ Wonderful poem Jim thank you. Love, Carol

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 8/26/2009 10:23:00 PM

i love to play in the same place you play Jimmy--sweet write.............i love this place,the poetry and good friends like you..........charma:)

Donna Golden

Date: 8/26/2009 10:00:00 PM

Love it, Jimbo! I'm now inspired to come out and play with the Limerick form as well! Hugs, Donna