Playing Our Song

Still playing our song, Was it “ The way you look tonight?” After all, the yester-years have whirled big time into dizzy roller-coaster spins ... If by romance you mean toes twinkling by the sand, where our feet met in tender July as duskfall melted white when wet kisses sprayed the breeze on trills of vestal wedding chimes... And jealous clouds witnessed this dazzling pirouette for two; eyes touching each other twenty fingers becoming ten in wrapped ball of surrender... That is too sweet to hang on dipping stars, it may as well be romance... but then, the garbage overflows and laundry piling on double racks; while that big time frown turns sleek, after finishing off the house grind... until arms enchantingly come at me to relish " The way you look tonight." ........... Debbie Guzzi's Talk The Talk, Walk The Walk "big time"-- 80s slang meaning" extremely, completely, in a grand way."
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Guzzi Avatar
June 26, 2015 at 5:40 PM
Silly YOU, this was a fine verse! I loved it but I asked for Prose Poetry & Free Verse- its the only reason you are HM Congrad's on your win! Light & love
La France Avatar
June 26, 2015 at 4:38 PM
Nette, congratulations on your wonderful placement with this beautiful write 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, not that long ago
A   Avatar
June 25, 2015 at 11:59 PM
Hi Nette, Congratulations ... LOVE LINDA
A  Avatar
June 25, 2015 at 11:43 PM
Nette, Congrats on your "Talk the Talk and Walk the Walk WIN." **SKAT**
A. Sharma Avatar
June 25, 2015 at 11:06 PM
Amazing pen u have nette! Congrats on ur win!
Konos Avatar
June 25, 2015 at 9:39 PM
Way To Go...Nette on Cloud 9...Congratulations.....
Lamoureux Avatar
June 23, 2015 at 8:12 AM
I love the mood of this piece.
Callus Avatar
June 21, 2015 at 4:17 PM
Elton John or Frank Sinatra...both ideal for a romantic evening...after house chores are done:) It is up to us to keep the fires burning! hugs / paul
La France Avatar
June 20, 2015 at 2:45 PM
Nette, you have a beautiful and dreamy pen, a wonderful 7 and thanks for visiting my poetry
Andresen Avatar
June 20, 2015 at 1:39 PM
- A dreamy and lovely poem Nette - I wish you a great weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
June 20, 2015 at 10:04 AM
Your tender words are sweet music to my ears Nette you chose a stunning romantic song to include in your beautiful poem - i adore the version by Bryan Ferry! :-)hugs jan xx 7 xx
Parker Avatar
June 20, 2015 at 9:37 AM
The moments of romance shared as two come to meet.The thought of love intertwined with life forever dancing on the sweet breath of kisses.The deep reality of two people living together, dishes, laundry, cleaning, raising kids, all the mundane moments far from the vision once held.Yet more precious than moonlite skies where two first dreamed brings commitment a jewel polished by fire of years and love that becomes wrapped in forever..my first thought after reading your beautiful poem.
Strand Avatar
June 20, 2015 at 1:58 AM
Thank you Nette for your kind comments on my tristich poem.Have a good weekend and best wishes with your creative endeavours.Rgds Brian
Datu Avatar
June 20, 2015 at 12:29 AM
Twenty fingers becoming ten can make the song of ardor play on. Lighting me up with your flawless pen!
Lalion Avatar
June 20, 2015 at 12:08 AM
Sweet mix of romance and reality, the merry-go rounds and lousy chores! Impressive poem, Nette.
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June 20, 2015 at 12:09 AM
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