Liam Mcdaid Poet Free verse

Playing a Heart Tune

gently tugging
upon heart strings
softly within
bells begin ringing
emotions rejoice
dropping the 
draw bridge
golden feelings 
gates open

in deep chambers
welcome princess
to the palace
of dreams
a castle
holding out
for you
one rose
from the heart

in this realm
golden sweet tunes
play on the heartstrings
sweetest music
of love
dancing on air
across streams
a stepping stone
walking on feelings
emotions call 
your name

heading in
the right direction
to love again
in your love
a dream

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Sarai Virden November 19, 2013 at 10:52 AM "The palace of dreams" beautifully penned Liam

Charmaine Chircop November 18, 2013 at 11:14 AM Walking on feelings emotion calls your name..That is very sentimental.Lovely thoughts penned.

Richard Lamoureux November 17, 2013 at 8:42 PM Good night Liam thanks for all your thoughtful visits and comments.

Ken Carroll November 17, 2013 at 4:12 PM Hi Liam, Nicely crafted romantic write my friend.. Ken

Anne-Lise Andresen November 17, 2013 at 4:07 PM - When the text fits the music ..... it becomes a beautiful harmony! - Love it, Liam! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud November 17, 2013 at 12:35 PM The gate,bridge, chamber....all leading ot an opening of love...well-knit tapestry of a theme so radiantly done, partner..:) huggs

Poet Destroyer A November 17, 2013 at 1:06 AM wow.. a nice play on words... tugging the music within... xox..Linda

Richard Lamoureux November 16, 2013 at 2:21 PM Did you mean "in your love a dream? Somehow you doesn't flow as well. The rest of the poem for me is perfect. I like the play on words bridge and golden and gate. very clever and effective.

Eileen Manassian November 16, 2013 at 11:30 AM Lovely Liam..... :) How lovely to be a princess....to delight in music and love and serenades and to have someone call your name in a loving voice. Beautiful write...