Playing

Each day playing with a girl with hairdresser allure
I live in a blond poem of air, near the timid azure:
Counting the legs walking in the park of my spring,
I tell you sweet nothing, to exclaim: how interesting!

So, I play with the days laughing of me, in the rye:
Leggy girls drawing a shining horizon of their thigh.
In my cradle of wishful thinking, the fugitive Albertine
Escaped from Proust, still smiles in the same scene.
In which, I really am the catcher of each invented joy.
So, I play with the sun  running the long clouds convoy.

And you keep your hand on my shoulder and smile,
Like only a sunny day  knows: at distance of a mile,
Far away from the young tempest jumping the rope.
Some days borrowed the perfume of Miss Hope...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 10/20/2016 2:41:00 PM
Very nice poem
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Date: 9/28/2016 12:28:00 PM
Just read your poems. :-) I like your work Ovidiu
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Date: 9/21/2016 10:11:00 PM
I like your work, feels good; that such a great poet as yourself would find merit in my ramblings ,,,be blessed, thanks.
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Date: 8/22/2016 3:12:00 PM
I was just listening to Leo Rojas - Der mit dem Wolf tanzt. The pan pipes allows for a different perspective on life, much like a spiritual cleansing. A wonderfully composed poem, Ovidiu. You have much to share of true poetry, that is outside the bounds of a poetical pageantry. Keep well, best wishes, Mikki
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Date: 7/14/2016 11:32:00 AM
You're right, we must live one day at time. Very nice..
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Date: 5/18/2016 1:20:00 PM
I liked the nostalgic feeling of this poem and the way that it evokes our own childhood memories... Beautifully written, Ovidiu. I enjoyed this very much!
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Date: 4/29/2016 6:32:00 AM
Nice concept & amazing write. I enjoyed to read this one.............hugs
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Date: 4/17/2016 1:41:00 PM
Very well written Ovidu. I enjoyed each n every line of the nice play. Love. Anisha D
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Date: 4/17/2016 1:30:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your poem. love phyl
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Date: 4/16/2016 11:44:00 PM
Excellent poem with playful imagery unlike anything I've seen in a poem before. You are a very talented writer. Thank you for commenting on my meager poem. I think I need to make a few changes. Your poetry was also very picturesque.
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Date: 4/10/2016 12:09:00 PM
I enjoyed reading this gem.......A.M.
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Date: 4/7/2016 9:24:00 PM
Lyrical and fun Ovidiu! I love reading poetry like this. Very nice to meet you! ; )
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Date: 4/6/2016 11:56:00 AM
Lovely lovely warm write....Ovidiu 7
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Date: 4/6/2016 10:53:00 AM
Ovidiu, a lovely write, it just floated along ~
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Date: 4/5/2016 11:55:00 AM
Liked the last quatrain the best - especially "the perfume of Miss Hope". Very uplifting! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 3/27/2016 11:47:00 PM
This is a very well written poem. Thank you for posting this!
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Date: 3/26/2016 7:24:00 AM
I love the line, "...I play with the sun running the long clouds convoy." Great write!
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Date: 3/26/2016 4:52:00 AM
Well I see you are fantasizing... Enjoyed reading this poem Ovidiu... Verlena
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