Playground

Playground…

Playground…
I am making decisions every morning,
None of them comes along with any warning.
To go right or to go left, which one is right?
Living in darkness or hoping to see light.
I made million decisions, most of them fine,
Few I made that I think it wasn’t mine. 
Few that changed my life led me to despair,
I wish I had a chance go back and repair. 
What if I had the power to do it right?
To go back and play all day and all night.
What if I can go back to play like a young?
To sing all of the songs that ought to be sung.
What if, instead of books, I learned to live life,
to learn dance, and learn to play with no more strife?
Alas, sun is setting, darkness coming soon.
My hope is to see it; that wandering moon.
I wish there was a game I could play now.
A childish game if you can show me it how.
The sinful mirror on my nearest wall,
Reminding my summer has gone; it is fall.
The autumn now, it is cold and full of pain.
The winter promises more days to complain.
I am thinking to go back and do it right.
As if mistakes never were an oversight. 
I am thinking of a play in the playground.
To play as young again, hope youth to be found.
If I play hard again, I might become young,
I will dance like a fool, unknown and unsung.
I don’t know where to play or who I can trust. 
In this strange game of life, aging is unjust.
Where is my playground, my supernal bliss?
Awake me once again; no life is like this.
7/28/18 Haloo  




Note: This particular style of poetry is called "Masnavi"; it is a spiritual couplet usually with eleven syllables. Poetrysoup has a great explanation and example of this form of poetry.
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May Avatar
June 19, 2020 at 9:03 PM
Coming to the realization that we have to live with the mistakes, Very nicely penned Pashang
Dietrich Avatar
January 20, 2020 at 2:57 PM
I love how this makes us feel the yearning for youth again. I often put that into my poetry. That is what happens in the "fall" of our lives. I am hope to have a long winter at least!
Dietrich Avatar
January 20, 2020 at 2:57 PM
I actually remember as a child swinging on the playground and feeling lonely. In some ways, it's better in my "now"
Ajmal Avatar
December 22, 2018 at 12:32 PM
Such a lovely poem this is, Absolutely wonderful and certainly a fav for me. You see that this is the cruelty of life, so many things to do, yet so little time, once the time is gone then it never returns and it only left us with regrets.guess that I am late but I hope that it isn't too late to congrats you, so many congratulations on your poem being chosen as POTD, Well today is 22 December so I wish you a merry Christmas and a really happy new year, good luck and have a really nice day
Salehi Avatar
December 24, 2018 at 11:23 AM
Thank you Faraz, Merry Christmas to you as well...
B. Avatar
December 18, 2018 at 8:32 PM
A belated Congratulations on poem your POTD, my friend.. Really enjoyed your creativity!! Wonderfully penned and so relatable.. Blessings to you..
Salehi Avatar
December 18, 2018 at 11:49 PM
Thanks dear...
Raven Avatar
December 15, 2018 at 2:35 PM
Hi Pashang, so many times, when I was in my forties I could find myself thinking, "I wish I could go back and change this or that." I reached my fifties and another change, I decided I liked my life as it was and I would change nothing. Everything, even my mistakes have made me who I am. I could relate to this poem in my forties. You have written these feelings so well my friend. Let the playground be life itself. Excellent work. Have a wonderful weekend. Your friend always....Mike.
Salehi Avatar
December 15, 2018 at 4:08 PM
Thanks, Mike... we will find our playground sooner or later. Happy Holidays.
Ball Avatar
December 11, 2018 at 6:57 AM
Well done Pashang. Many of us wish we could go back and do certain things over. That's why it's best to make sure mind is in gear before putting thoughts into motion. If there is doubt don't. Well done here. God Bless, JB
Salehi Avatar
December 11, 2018 at 12:01 PM
Thank Judy...
Sathasivam Avatar
December 9, 2018 at 1:01 AM
Excellent and great words. Congratulations on your well deserved POTD
Salehi Avatar
December 9, 2018 at 1:55 AM
Thank you, Ravi
Smith Avatar
December 8, 2018 at 5:52 PM
This one will strike a chord with so many and get them thinking and I hope playground hunting. Wonderful. Very best regards David in NZ
Salehi Avatar
December 9, 2018 at 1:55 AM
Thank you David... all the best... Pash in L.A.
Hinshaw Avatar
December 7, 2018 at 7:10 PM
Excellent verse, Pashang! I enjoyed the flow of the poem and I had never before read poetry in the Masnavi form - very delightful! Many thanks for your kind comments re the Snowperson. Best to you as you continue your poetical journey - Bob
Salehi Avatar
December 7, 2018 at 8:03 PM
Thanks Bob... You are so kind...
De Beaulieu Avatar
December 5, 2018 at 9:05 PM
Hello Pashang,it would be nice to turn back the time, to be young again to be able to go on the swings again. But it can not be done. have a nice evening my friend. Good night.
Salehi Avatar
December 5, 2018 at 10:07 PM
Thank you good night.
Rose  Avatar
December 3, 2018 at 6:04 PM
you are so very versatile with your poems, nice one Pashang Have a nice evening,
Salehi Avatar
December 5, 2018 at 2:52 PM
Thank you dear Pixie...
Bocsa Avatar
December 3, 2018 at 10:15 AM
Absolutely lovely as usually,proving to be a real master of Masnavi. As a humble Bumble bee, I passed around attracted by the honey and exotical perfume of your noble poetry completed by psychological picture. I would like to be your apprentice...
Salehi Avatar
December 3, 2018 at 10:27 AM
Thank you, my dear Ovidiu, you are so wonderful.
Godwin Avatar
November 29, 2018 at 11:53 PM
Oh, do I relate to this, in feeling and content, it is a mirror to many besides me, I'm sure. Well done and a very worthy read. All the best ... CayCay
Salehi Avatar
December 2, 2018 at 10:49 PM
Thanks CayCay... you are so kind.
Horne Avatar
November 29, 2018 at 9:16 AM
lovely poem & a very interesting form - must try this form
Salehi Avatar
December 2, 2018 at 10:48 PM
Thanks Jack, please let me know.
Andresen Avatar
November 26, 2018 at 6:02 AM
- A wonderful poem, Pashang :) - Congratulations on yours p.o.t.d. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Salehi Avatar
November 26, 2018 at 10:48 AM
You are wonderful Anne Lise... Thank you.
Williams Avatar
November 26, 2018 at 5:37 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved POTD Pashang. Amazing as always...Maria
Salehi Avatar
November 26, 2018 at 10:47 AM
My dearest Maria Thank you...
Turner Avatar
November 25, 2018 at 11:43 PM
Congratulations on a well deserved POTD Pashang. What's to come is unknown. You may get your chance:)
Salehi Avatar
November 26, 2018 at 1:33 AM
Oh Hello DT, Nice to see you again... Thanks.
Nicole Avatar
November 25, 2018 at 10:43 PM
Yes, going back to the past- going back to yesterday. To stay and play. I think we all can relate. To change a few things. I think staying in this moment, to live and learn. Is best. Moments of long ago are for our learning indeed. Congratulations Pashang, on Poem of the Day. ~ Brandy
Salehi Avatar
November 26, 2018 at 1:31 AM
Thank you Brandy...
La France Avatar
November 25, 2018 at 10:29 PM
Pashang, congratulations on POTD with this amazing write, enjoy the honor ~
Salehi Avatar
November 26, 2018 at 1:30 AM
Thank you, Dear Heart...
Riabi Dziri Avatar
November 25, 2018 at 12:48 PM
Congratulations on your POTD Pashang! A recognition well deserved for your outstanding poetry! My deepest regards..
Salehi Avatar
November 25, 2018 at 1:34 PM
Thank you Besma, you are a great friend.
Wanter Avatar
November 25, 2018 at 11:45 AM
Love the poem, love the picture! Congratulations!
Salehi Avatar
November 25, 2018 at 1:34 PM
Thank you Sunlite...
Allison Avatar
November 25, 2018 at 11:18 AM
Oh Pashang I am SO delighted to see you get POTD, so lovely to see a different name on the roll of honour!:-) hugs Jan xx
Salehi Avatar
November 25, 2018 at 1:32 PM
Thanks Jan, you're so wonderful.
Warrior Avatar
November 25, 2018 at 10:48 AM
All you need is one more masterpiece...and you'll have a hat trick...superb in all aspects Pashang...Congrats!!! on your POTD!! my friend...love & light...^WW^
Salehi Avatar
November 25, 2018 at 10:59 AM
Thank you WW, hearing it from you is an honor by itself.
Moore Avatar
November 25, 2018 at 10:23 AM
Excellent rhymes and so true
Salehi Avatar
November 25, 2018 at 10:57 AM
Thank you Jay...
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