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Playful Love-Fate

The beat of a heart moving fast Reaching out the last breath can breathe The palms are getting cold It becomes pale willing to fall Years have past for thousand lies With false smiles and false love For he knew to count different me Tear my dreams and future for him A whisper whispering me to kill my own self After to know the biggest revelation came The fearless other one that he loved was... A girl that I love most and brings my blood How can I live with her? How can I turn my eyes to her? The loathing spirit pushing myself For them who put evil on my head!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 6/28/2013 7:35:00 AM
Definately pinches. Well expressed!
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Date: 6/11/2013 5:33:00 PM
This is great, a clear depiction of your pain. wonderfully written
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Elai Cee
Date: 6/23/2013 8:55:00 AM
yes Emily... thank u for the visit
Date: 5/20/2013 5:42:00 PM
Your work is well constructed and pleasant reading... You capture the spirit of the deceit we sometimes find in a painful love.... Jake
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Elai Cee
Date: 5/24/2013 4:55:00 AM
thank you John
Date: 5/15/2013 8:57:00 AM
This is very strong & hard hitting. Excellent job!
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Elai Cee
Date: 5/16/2013 12:17:00 AM
Thanks Drake!
Date: 5/11/2013 1:23:00 PM
hello my friend we live to learn i think to acknowledge the pain speeds the cure i hope this helps thank you
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Elai Cee
Date: 5/20/2013 3:40:00 AM
thanks kevin
Date: 5/10/2013 11:51:00 AM
Hi poets!!! Hope to enjoy reading this and can give something that pinch your heart ! ....keep smiling---------elai
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