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Playful Chant of Wind

To run with daybreak’s ambient wind, sliding past a legion of balmy trees while fragrant vapor meets the dew; like a satin ribbon twirling ‘round fresh dawn, awakened: and it playfully ruffles my dress through mild whispers brushing my air-tossed hair: ~One more soft roulette of tangy draft pats my flesh gentle as hushed kiss!~ Morning's gust speaks in lilts to play among a bevy of flowers, oh invisible yet felt ever lightly while it chants afar, only to glide back and enfold me with a brighter touch of a symphony. Strand No 800 Finale ~ Second stanza: senryu form DH
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Mcintosh Avatar
June 17, 2020 at 7:17 AM
Lovely poem, dear friend. I think you have an amazing talent - Wishing you all the creativity needed to write from the heart and soul... God bless you dear lady with all your heart desires. Love, Gina
Sergi Avatar
August 16, 2019 at 4:53 PM
Hi nette! What a beautiful atmospheric air of discovery that hints to sensuality. Please tell me if that was your intention and CONGRATULATIONS!
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 14, 2019 at 2:40 PM
The mélange of music and the wind and the other lovely elements of nature make this poem of vivid colors culminate into the winner it is Nette. Congratulations on your well deserved win! : ) xxoo
Ravidas Avatar
August 14, 2019 at 5:59 AM
What an airy, weightless, ethereal and at the same time sensual poem! J'aime and fave. Congrats, Nette)
La France Avatar
August 12, 2019 at 7:32 PM
Nette congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful write and I love your image too
Mcgee Avatar
August 12, 2019 at 7:29 PM
Beautiful. Congrats on your win.
Scars Avatar
August 12, 2019 at 6:14 PM
amazing....you inspire me...congrats :)-luloo
Casto Avatar
August 12, 2019 at 9:40 AM
The element of air surely invigorates as reflected through your brilliant work. Thank you for considering my entry!
Scars Avatar
August 11, 2019 at 6:05 PM
wow amazing! good luck sweet Nette, reads like a winner to me :) -luloo
Cunningham Avatar
August 11, 2019 at 5:10 PM
Beautifully written nette. Tom
Horsman Avatar
August 11, 2019 at 4:58 PM
Oh how wonderful is this, you write it nette as though you are one with the wind, Dear Heart will love this...
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