Playful Chant of Wind

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To run with daybreak’s ambient wind, sliding past a legion of balmy trees while fragrant vapor meets the dew; like a satin ribbon twirling ‘round fresh dawn, awakened: and it playfully ruffles my dress through mild whispers brushing my air-tossed hair: ~One more soft roulette of tangy draft pats my flesh gentle as hushed kiss!~ Morning's gust speaks in lilts to play among a bevy of flowers, oh invisible yet felt ever lightly while it chants afar, only to glide back and enfold me with a brighter touch of a symphony. Strand No 800 Finale ~ Second stanza: senryu form DH

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Date: 6/17/2020 7:17:00 AM
Lovely poem, dear friend. I think you have an amazing talent - Wishing you all the creativity needed to write from the heart and soul... God bless you dear lady with all your heart desires. Love, Gina
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Date: 8/16/2019 4:53:00 PM
Hi nette! What a beautiful atmospheric air of discovery that hints to sensuality. Please tell me if that was your intention and CONGRATULATIONS!
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Date: 8/14/2019 2:40:00 PM
The mélange of music and the wind and the other lovely elements of nature make this poem of vivid colors culminate into the winner it is Nette. Congratulations on your well deserved win! : ) xxoo
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Date: 8/14/2019 5:59:00 AM
What an airy, weightless, ethereal and at the same time sensual poem! J'aime and fave. Congrats, Nette)
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Date: 8/12/2019 7:32:00 PM
Nette congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful write and I love your image too
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Date: 8/12/2019 7:29:00 PM
Beautiful. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 8/12/2019 6:14:00 PM
amazing....you inspire me...congrats :)-luloo
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Date: 8/12/2019 9:40:00 AM
The element of air surely invigorates as reflected through your brilliant work. Thank you for considering my entry!
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Date: 8/11/2019 6:05:00 PM
wow amazing! good luck sweet Nette, reads like a winner to me :) -luloo
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Date: 8/11/2019 5:10:00 PM
Beautifully written nette. Tom
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Date: 8/11/2019 4:58:00 PM
Oh how wonderful is this, you write it nette as though you are one with the wind, Dear Heart will love this...
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