Playful

A young puppy came into my home today
Tiny and nervous, his siblings far away
It didn't take him long to come out from his shell
Just little scared when he first heard the door bell.

Sniffing an exploring he left little wee puddles
We laid on the sofa having snuggles and cuddles.
Placed next to his bed was a box of new toys
Balls, a tug rope an one that made squeaky noise.

At first he showed little interest in any of these 
But liked to find places that was bit of a squeeze
Learning new surroundings, I would watch him explore
Running excitedly he'd crash into a door.

He chewed some plants, dug holes in the lawn
Had me up early; often at dawn
Playful, energetic, always wanting to play
We were both very tired at end of each day.

He yapped in the mirror at his own reflection 
Then came small growls, his guarded protection
He just needed time to feel safe and to adjust
I felt honoured when he gave me his trust.

Everything to him was a new game to play
Lively and learning life rules to obey
My carpet became his latest new toy
Chewed an in tatters by my playful boy.

"P" Contest, New or Old Poetry Contest

Sponsor  Constance La France 

Written   25.09.21

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Constance La France

Date: 10/5/2021 8:13:00 AM

Emilia, congratulations on your win in my "P" contest with this delightful poem, well done and wonderfully penned ~ love and serenity _Constance

Sam Kauffman

Date: 10/3/2021 9:39:00 AM

Emilia, congratulations on your top win with this delightful poem about puppy playfulness and energy! One of our puppies seemed to be able to sniff out my new shoes! Went through several pairs. A friend has a new puppy who is doing all of the above things! Moxie comes to play with Paddy to burn off some of that puppy energy! Hope your puppy has outgrown some of these behaviors! Blessings.

Sam Kauffman
Date: 10/5/2021 1:07:00 PM

Our twelve year old Paddy had a play date with a Moxie yesterday. They played for two solid hours! She is definitely keeping him young! He loved it!

Emilia James
Date: 10/3/2021 12:59:00 PM

Thank you so very much Sam. He is now 4 years old and still has the energy of a puppy. He is very loyal and protective of me and always by my side. He learns very quickly and immediately responsive to commands. I reckon he is more intelligent than me lol. Emilia : )

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 10/1/2021 12:53:00 PM

What a fun/cute write. I Love It. A new puppy. What a joy. Have a blessed day/weekend with your new friend..............

Emilia James
Date: 10/3/2021 12:46:00 PM

Thank you so much Paula. Hope your weekend was a good one. Emilia : )

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 9/30/2021 11:45:00 AM

Congrats! This is marvelous; reminds me of my own sweet puppy!

Emilia James
Date: 10/3/2021 12:44:00 PM

Thank you so much Caren. Puppies bring so much joy. I soon forget about the chewed things and their little puddle gifts. Emilia : )

Christuraj Alex

Date: 9/27/2021 8:49:00 PM

Beautiful Narration! Great Work! Congratulations!

Emilia James
Date: 9/28/2021 12:31:00 PM

Thank you so much for your positive comment Christuraj. Emilia : )

Ann Peck

Date: 9/27/2021 2:47:00 PM

Such a tender poem and your descriptions are great. My mind watched as your puppy did his puppy things. (I've always had dogs.) Congratulations!

Emilia James
Date: 9/27/2021 3:55:00 PM

Thank you so very much Ann. I'm a dog lover too. There has always been at least one throughout my life. Emilia : )

Jan Allison

Date: 9/27/2021 12:00:00 PM

such a fun poem Emilia, many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

Emilia James
Date: 9/27/2021 3:50:00 PM

Thank you so much Jan, this was such a lovely surprise. Hugs, Emilia : ) xx

Simon Hamill

Date: 9/26/2021 2:43:00 PM

Hi Emilia.such a cute poem.they are like children when their pups.get away with anything.lol.good luck in comp.i love it.take care.simon.:):)

Emilia James
Date: 9/27/2021 3:48:00 PM

Thank you so much Simon. They are and do indeed even when no longer a pup. Emilia : )

John Gondolf

Date: 9/26/2021 5:18:00 AM

I enjoyed your fun poem, Emilia, little puppies are always so cute and fun. Good luck in the contest. Hope all is well in your part of the world. Hugs, John

Emilia James
Date: 9/27/2021 3:47:00 PM

Thank you so much John, they sure keep you fit too. All is well thank you. There is a petrol issue going on here at the moment. Emilia : )