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sunlit ripples dance playfully mirrored exponential joy Submitted on May 22, 2018 in contest PREMIERE NO.150 sponsored by BRIAN STRAND Originally posted in April, 2018

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Date: 4/29/2018 5:24:00 AM
At first I thought ripples was nipples, and guess what, the poem still works that way. Very nice, Line.
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Date: 4/29/2018 7:07:00 AM
I guess it would. LOL Thanks, Caren.

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