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Playboy Model.

Sweet sensual skin wears scruples thin until you see your own true sin.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/15/2010 9:51:00 PM

No win for this one?? What the heck?? Me LIKES

Date: 7/14/2010 11:17:00 AM

So much truth shared up the inner destruction of the soul with this type of life. Best wishes in the contest. Thank you for sharing this message with us and for your kind comment. Hope the Twins start playing better than they have recently. Pitching! Yikes! Karen

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/13/2010 6:46:00 PM

Quite a profound thought, Gerard. The exterior cannot camouflage the beauty within. One for my favorites. Love, Carolyn

Tim Ryerson

Date: 7/13/2010 4:29:00 PM

Love the 'S' alliteration throughout this poem, Gerard...much wisdom shown here also...Great combo of funny yet serious...VERY hard to pull off but you nailed it! - Tim

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 7/13/2010 9:00:00 AM

Excellent write, good luck in the contest. Caryl

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/12/2010 7:46:00 PM

Thankxxx ..Gerard.. u are like my guardian angel for letting me know about that typo.. appreciate.. my fingers are really quick on the keyboard and lots of the entries were typed on my neat cell phone with keys barely big enough for a muchkin..haha.. appreciate your kind encouraging remarks too.. with luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/12/2010 7:41:00 PM

I could detect the humor with serious thought. Good luck in the contest

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/12/2010 4:13:00 PM

BINGO Gerard.. a Grook if ever I read one and so up to the current times .. good luck in Charles's contest.. with luv..

Carrie Richards

Date: 7/12/2010 3:53:00 PM

Oh wow...this is terrific, Gerard!! "wears scruples thin"....what a fantastic line!! Love this! :)