Play Not a Dirge When I Am Gone

Play Not A Dirge When I Am Gone

Play not a dirge when I am gone;
light no candles, not even one.
A treasured poem would be enough  
to mark my end when curtain’s drawn.

Hold no sad wakes to honor me
some happy poems, I’d rather be 
recited on a night for friends
then spread my ashes o'er the sea.

And wonder not nor be afraid
if less of love you have conveyed;
you’re part of me and that’s enough,
while life’s not fair, I’m not dismayed.

If comes a time that you remember
that one fine day in November,
then send a kiss toward the sea
and just forget this fly in amber.*


When I Am Dead My Dearest

by Cristina Georgina Rossetti

When I am dead, my dearest,
Sing no sad songs for me;
Plant thou no roses at my head,
Nor shady cypress tree:
Be the green grass above me
With showers and dewdrops wet;
And if thou wilt, remember,
And if thou wilt, forget.

I shall not see the shadows,
I shall not feel the rain;
I shall not hear the nightingale
Sing on, as if in pain:
And dreaming through the twilight
That doth not rise nor set,
Haply I may remember,
And haply may forget.



*fly in amber - noun, reminder of the past


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Goff Avatar
October 31, 2015 at 9:35 AM
Very much enjoyed, Kim, thank you! jimbo
Salehi Avatar
October 30, 2015 at 6:40 PM
Play Not A Dirge When I Am Gone.... This is my thoughts as well...The crude translation of one of ^Rumi^'s Verse is this: Go and die, go and die, let this existence pass you by. This existence is your tie and prisoners you and I.Thank you for showing me the way.
Dietrich Avatar
October 11, 2015 at 8:54 AM
wow, I had not read her winners' list even though I was on it. Yours is superb, Kim. CAn't believe I missed this one of yours. You chose such a great poem to emulate, and I like yours just as much as the famous author's whose poem you chose! Congrats for your win. I will have to see the list again to see where you placed!
A  Avatar
October 2, 2015 at 10:12 PM
Hi KIm, congratulations on your wonderful win. SKAT
Tor Avatar
October 2, 2015 at 9:23 PM
Kim excellent win! You have done justice to her farewell write.
Dunn Avatar
October 2, 2015 at 6:15 PM
Dear Kim What a memorial piece of poetry, a tribute of sadness and life, just subperbly done, and written so well, simply excellent, cheri
Lindley Avatar
October 2, 2015 at 6:07 PM
BOTH ARE TRULY AWESOME POEMS. Kudos on such creativity and your win my friend. A7
Muideen Avatar
October 2, 2015 at 5:56 PM
Your descriptive is beautifully expressed KIM. A great deal of work is done in this perfect write. A fascinating piece............A.M.
Haight Avatar
October 2, 2015 at 2:37 PM
Wow, Kim...this is so lovely, and how well you have echoed the poetess' feelings through your own emotional words. A heartfelt congratulations to you on your wonderful win. 7, Hugs, Sandra
Sietesantos Avatar
October 2, 2015 at 8:06 AM
A brilliant write deserving of its win! In line with the sentiments you so beautifully expressed, I prefer to go with a celebration of my life than with an overflow of grief. Congratulations, dear Kim! Pandita
Kendrick Avatar
October 2, 2015 at 8:01 AM
Enjoyed both poems..I was not familiar with this writer..I will have to look up some of her works..Thanks for the visit to my page..I appreciate the time spent there..Sara
Kendrick Avatar
October 3, 2015 at 6:02 AM
Kim, I read some of her works and enjoyed them..I will have to try to get a copy of some of her works in a book..Thanks for letting us know about her.. Sara
Nunez Avatar
October 2, 2015 at 11:01 PM
Thank you, Sara! She's the author of A Daughter of Eve and Remember. The above poem is my personal favorite, though.
Ward Avatar
October 2, 2015 at 12:54 AM
An excellent poem - well done for its win, Kim.
Raha Avatar
September 30, 2015 at 9:42 AM
You've more than done justice to her beautiful farewell poem.yes you're right,like you I also would appreciate a simple farewell without the festival.
Trifiatis Avatar
September 30, 2015 at 4:59 AM
A profoundly metaphysical and melancholic writing that beautifies poetic expressions, dear Kim!
Sathasivam Avatar
September 30, 2015 at 12:16 AM
Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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