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Play Me A Teardrop

Play me a teardrop, that sits atop my heart strings. One to make the Angels weep, a vigil to my soul. Strum me sad chords, that affords my mournful cry, to spill upon your memory, still within my mind. Choose the notes carefully, as floats petals on the wind. To land softer, than the whisper of your breath. Keep slow, the tempo and low the expectations, I don't know how to say goodbye, so play me a teardrop.
For the contest: The Rhyme Inside Sponsored by Debbie Guzzi Placement: 4th

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Date: 3/29/2011 7:04:00 PM
Good to see you at the top with this fourth place win, Paula Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/29/2011 12:19:00 PM
touching and strangely reminiscent of movies such as CASABLANCA....kind of old- fashioned sincerity not easily found nowadays.....lovely poem....best wishes ..Syd
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Date: 3/29/2011 11:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Paula in Debbie Guzzi's contest "The Rhyme Inside". Love, Carol
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Date: 3/29/2011 9:59:00 AM
Fabulous poem, Paula. Really touched my heart. Congratulations on your win in Deb's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/29/2011 8:31:00 AM
This should be put to music....it is just sadly beautiful !! Congratulations, Paula!!
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Date: 3/29/2011 4:39:00 AM
Congratulations on the fourth place win in the contest, Paula
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Date: 3/28/2011 9:28:00 PM
WOW, I love the brevity and the coolness of this one. It's light as a petal and beautiful. Big congratulations on one of my favorites in this contest!
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Date: 3/28/2011 9:17:00 PM
Paula - Many Congrats on big win with this superb creative write. Luv & Best wishes-Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 3/28/2011 8:54:00 PM
Such a beautiful and touching rhyme. Warm congrats for this win.
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Date: 3/28/2011 7:39:00 PM
Congrats Paula on your top ten winning poem in Debbie's contest with this excellent entry and superb rhyme luv.. enjoy another great well deserved win my friend..luv..to u...
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Date: 3/28/2011 6:38:00 PM
Sensational dear Paula. Congratulations on your BIG WIN. Elaine
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Date: 3/28/2011 5:40:00 PM
Paula this was a marvelous write sheer perfection all in the top four were number one writes and theirs just went on longer. I love love love this 7 and a fav. Congrad's on your win! Light & Love
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Date: 3/15/2011 10:47:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry this today Paula. The best to you in Debbie's contest. Have a wonderful week filled with good health, love, and lots of inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/14/2011 9:11:00 PM
I really like this.And thanks for advice.I'm sorry I had the form messed up,I am still learning as I go.I''ll do better promise.Kacey
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Date: 3/14/2011 5:53:00 PM
Fantastic! Ohhh Lala if you were a man I'd swoon! Actually if you have it in you I'd absolutely LOVE you to GO ON [I can be greedy!] Light & Love
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Date: 3/14/2011 5:23:00 PM
A terrific write Paula..went straight to my heart. BG
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Date: 3/14/2011 5:18:00 PM
have heard that song....rewind/loop again....jimbo
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