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Skatin' ... On a sheet of ice The girl she fell And her heels clicked twice. She crinkled her nose, And her thoughts weren't nice. She sat on her butt On sheets of ice. Frozen.In Time... Thinkin'. In.Rhyme. Then from the air The sun came shine'in On her butt there The girl started smilin' As the sheet of ice... Melted. Her naughty thoughts pelted, By a ray of sparkling sun.Shine. Off came her skates As the grass started growin' Fresh came the wind As the flowers started showin' And warm was her heart As the music started flowin'. Hey look! A rainbow there! Fresh air! A stream started runnin' And some bees came ahummin' And Bear came strummin'... That a Platypus was seen, swimming... in the air. This place is *****. But the girl, With the skates, Who fell? Decided she liked it And decided to stay And Play. Write. Hear.

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Date: 5/8/2009 7:25:00 PM
oh cool!! cool!!! cool!!!! "Lewis Carrol" like!!! love the playful 'time travel' in this great write!! way to go Izzy!! Jim
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