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Platinum Savior

Watching the ships come into the bay Workers about, gathered on the quay Alone, I contemplate this here quandary Was taught never to air your dirty laundry You must present yourself with poise Hiding the inner turmoil and noise The cross I bear, my eternal penance Always front and center. Always in attendance It's presence has became familiar and quaint Comfortable. I admit, I've never been a saint I'm hard to rattle. I rarely let slip a quiver But to my surprise, there it was, a shiver With the ocean breeze wafting like perfume I'm taken back. Smells of peonies in bloom Visions of you swarm my brain. So handsome Glance at the ring you gave. Forever. Platinum You are what's at risk. These demons I must lose I've really got to start minding my P's and Q's

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Date: 3/26/2021 7:28:00 AM
Great pen Jessie showing nice imagery along with good rhyme too. Blessings always,Gordon
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Date: 3/15/2021 11:07:00 AM
If this was a winner in a contest, I can see why. Quite impressive. Congratulations.
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Jessie Jones
Date: 3/18/2021 7:52:00 AM
Thank you Robert! <3
Date: 3/8/2021 6:15:00 AM
Clever Jessie. :) Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Jessie Jones
Date: 3/12/2021 6:54:00 AM
Thank you so much Linda! <3
Date: 3/6/2021 4:18:00 PM
beautifully penned jessie, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan x
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Jessie Jones
Date: 3/12/2021 6:54:00 AM
Thank you Jan :)
Date: 3/6/2021 9:25:00 AM
Hi Jessie, I really enjoyed the lively meter and flow, and the closing lines are so creative! Congratulations and thank you for entering my contest~
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Jessie Jones
Date: 3/12/2021 6:54:00 AM
Thank you so much <3. I enjoyed the contest and challenge!
Date: 2/11/2021 12:23:00 PM
Reminders and Reflections of Love Shared :-) God Bless and Best Wishes to You...Peace
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Jessie Jones
Date: 2/11/2021 1:01:00 PM
Thank you James <3

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