Platinum Savior

Watching the ships come into the bay
Workers about, gathered on the quay
Alone, I contemplate this here quandary
Was taught never to air your dirty laundry
You must present yourself with poise
Hiding the inner turmoil and noise
The cross I bear, my eternal penance
Always front and center. Always in attendance
It's presence has became familiar and quaint
Comfortable. I admit, I've never been a saint
I'm hard to rattle. I rarely let slip a quiver
But to my surprise, there it was, a shiver
With the ocean breeze wafting like perfume
I'm taken back. Smells of peonies in bloom
Visions of you swarm my brain. So handsome
Glance at the ring you gave. Forever. Platinum
You are what's at risk. These demons I must lose
I've really got to start minding my P's and Q's
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Mcconnell Avatar
March 26, 2021 at 7:28 AM
Great pen Jessie showing nice imagery along with good rhyme too. Blessings always,Gordon
Pettit Avatar
March 15, 2021 at 11:07 AM
If this was a winner in a contest, I can see why. Quite impressive. Congratulations.
Jones Avatar
March 18, 2021 at 7:52 AM
Thank you Robert! <3
Fowler Avatar
March 8, 2021 at 6:15 AM
Clever Jessie. :) Congratulations on the win! Linda
Jones Avatar
March 12, 2021 at 6:54 AM
Thank you so much Linda! <3
Allison Avatar
March 6, 2021 at 4:18 PM
beautifully penned jessie, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan x
Jones Avatar
March 12, 2021 at 6:54 AM
Thank you Jan :)
Faulkner Avatar
March 6, 2021 at 9:25 AM
Hi Jessie, I really enjoyed the lively meter and flow, and the closing lines are so creative! Congratulations and thank you for entering my contest~
Jones Avatar
March 12, 2021 at 6:54 AM
Thank you so much <3. I enjoyed the contest and challenge!
Lagoski Avatar
February 11, 2021 at 12:23 PM
Reminders and Reflections of Love Shared :-) God Bless and Best Wishes to You...Peace
Jones Avatar
February 11, 2021 at 1:01 PM
Thank you James <3
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