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Platinum Savior

Watching the ships come into the bay
Workers about, gathered on the quay
Alone, I contemplate this here quandary
Was taught never to air your dirty laundry
You must present yourself with poise
Hiding the inner turmoil and noise
The cross I bear, my eternal penance
Always front and center. Always in attendance
It's presence has became familiar and quaint
Comfortable. I admit, I've never been a saint
I'm hard to rattle. I rarely let slip a quiver
But to my surprise, there it was, a shiver
With the ocean breeze wafting like perfume
I'm taken back. Smells of peonies in bloom
Visions of you swarm my brain. So handsome
Glance at the ring you gave. Forever. Platinum
You are what's at risk. These demons I must lose
I've really got to start minding my P's and Q's

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 3/26/2021 7:28:00 AM
Great pen Jessie showing nice imagery along with good rhyme too. Blessings always,Gordon
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Date: 3/15/2021 11:07:00 AM
If this was a winner in a contest, I can see why. Quite impressive. Congratulations.
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Jessie Jones
Date: 3/18/2021 7:52:00 AM
Thank you Robert! <3
Date: 3/8/2021 6:15:00 AM
Clever Jessie. :) Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Jessie Jones
Date: 3/12/2021 6:54:00 AM
Thank you so much Linda! <3
Date: 3/6/2021 4:18:00 PM
beautifully penned jessie, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan x
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Jessie Jones
Date: 3/12/2021 6:54:00 AM
Thank you Jan :)
Date: 3/6/2021 9:25:00 AM
Hi Jessie, I really enjoyed the lively meter and flow, and the closing lines are so creative! Congratulations and thank you for entering my contest~
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Jessie Jones
Date: 3/12/2021 6:54:00 AM
Thank you so much <3. I enjoyed the contest and challenge!
Date: 2/11/2021 12:23:00 PM
Reminders and Reflections of Love Shared :-) God Bless and Best Wishes to You...Peace
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Jessie Jones
Date: 2/11/2021 1:01:00 PM
Thank you James <3

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