Aurore Severo Poet Free verse

Plastics and Oil

My dear Grandma
alive and kicking
on this sunny day
modern medicine
and
miracles of science
life is a balance
between old and new
extremist aggressions
replaced by
rational transitions
not the end
only Zen

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Duke Beaufort May 7, 2024 at 11:13 AM Aurore, I'm reading this and thinking about how we have end of life issues in general here. I think many young doctors understand that there are limits to how we treat the elderly. Things take a long time to change. Hope she is still doing well!!

Richard Lamoureux September 3, 2023 at 5:38 AM Clever word play. Zen can take one a long way.

I Am Anaya August 31, 2023 at 2:32 PM Can you imagine, Aurore, when you are her age, Zen, always first, science we can't do without. Love your poetry. I Am Anaya

Chipepo Lwele January 6, 2023 at 9:38 AM Wonderful Aurore Severo August 20, 2023 at 12:59 AM Thank you

Ts Poetry October 22, 2022 at 3:36 AM Zen and the sun can do wonders Aurore Severo August 20, 2023 at 12:59 AM Thank you!