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Plastic Vodka

Plastic Vodka Cheap vodka from a plastic bottle Burns my throat Stops the pounding in my heart beat Slack dream the heady wishings Of a million burning kisses Stammers on a single glass rim Ah… why should we be apart And the air just smells of tinder In the smoke of you and me You lit this kindle fire That flames inside of me And I sit here in the swimming Of the things that should really be Sleeping in the vodka Staring at a blank and empty screen This heady night won’t be over Till I have drown inside your arms This taste of you that lingers Sweet drug upon my tongue The slow breath which just hangs there In a cigarettes spiral stair Slips your body and your beauty Into the seconds of my blood I go tumbling on an ice cube To etch the drawing of your heat I sit here in the daze of vodka But I am kneeling at your feet All the voices in a bar room In stiletto heels you sit And this overcome of passion Has me lost inside of you Why didn’t I count the consequence Was I stupid to the loss Perhaps the pass of fate perchance Made me ignorant of the cost Still I would sell my soul for a lie If it gave me a clue to you Cheap vodka from a plastic bottle Burns my throat Gives a voice to the silent burning Stops the yearning in my heart Emptied to the dregs To stop another sleepless night And I am succoured to the teat Of another vodka night Have I managed to water down The flame inside of me Disguised the white fire In this late nights drunken poetry Or reached the bottom of the bottle Where I drowned my misery I can’t express how much I love you Through my body and my limbs I can’t touch you in the touch Of intertwining skins So I lay here in the fumbling stupor Of the one last man left to drink The bold and cheap replacement And plastic vodka of my drink

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/30/2009 5:28:00 PM
Sick title. Popov is my vote. Nothing nastier. Now you're talking my language. Great lines. Heartfelt in a drunken stupor.
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Date: 5/2/2009 10:04:00 AM
WOW ... there are some classic lines in this piece ... love, "slack dream, the heady wishings" ... Vodka always made me deathly ill but gin and tonic kept me "drowning my misery" too ... smile ... great writing here, Colin !!
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Date: 4/25/2009 7:18:00 AM
Amazing write again my friend.
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Date: 4/25/2009 3:50:00 AM
This poem is entrancing. Drowning in alcohol can kill dreams and reality. I attended AA meetings as a toddler. (not with my parents) And just after reading your poem, I remembered a glimpse of their caring and kindness. Lives became better, when not lost in the plastic bottle. Excuse me if I seem pundit. It is just my nature to care. Keep writing beautiful and meaningful poetry like this. Always, Dane
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Date: 4/24/2009 7:02:00 PM
Unique poem. Quitting vodka is a blessing if mentioned as one of your stanza verses building up esteem. All the best.
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Date: 4/24/2009 3:26:00 PM
Captivating work, Colin. Love the way you express your longing while staring at the bottle of vodka. Liquor can certainly enhance the emotions, but your writing makes them rise to the surface of the "disguised white fire." Love, Carolyn
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