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Plastic Flowers

Sitting so pretty in a vase You lift your deceitful faces to the world. I may arrange you how I wish And I may rejoice that your thorns Lack the sting of real thorns; But betrayed, you always are When I touch you. Your delicately moulded petals are cold, And you stand upright Because you can do no other. You lack the perfume That is nature's inner attraction, And you do not droop and wilt, For you know not what it is to lack water. In pretending to live You are no flower. Forever beautiful, You live not at all. Forget artifice, but dare to take a drink From the bottomless well of life, And you will find the wonder of your making, The divinity of life, ripe for the picking.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 8/3/2017 9:45:00 AM
Excellent! One of the best I have read.
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Date: 5/4/2017 8:52:00 PM
This is a mind boggler it goes so many ways and means so many things... #Fake and Real!
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Date: 4/29/2017 8:44:00 PM
At least you don't have to water plastic flowers. A lovely poem,also a 7.
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Date: 4/28/2017 8:58:00 PM
Great last stanza. Kurt
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Date: 4/28/2017 6:10:00 PM
Gerald freaking poem Cecelia I reallly enjoyed the timid darkness <33 hopefully you will shall the love
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Date: 4/18/2017 6:34:00 PM
Good poem Cecelia. I once heard a song, There's nothing like the real thing..... Good message.
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Date: 4/18/2017 5:09:00 PM
Very clever with an important message. Well done Cecelia
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Date: 4/18/2017 6:41:00 AM
I think your extended metaphor is well developed and concluded with a clear message. Well done! Nature can teach us many good lessons!
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Date: 4/2/2017 4:50:00 PM
Cecilia, I love the flow of your poem and the power of your message. It's beautifully done. A 7 :) Amitiés
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Date: 4/1/2017 6:54:00 PM
Very deep metaphor, Cecelia! Loved it.
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