Plastic Flowers

Sitting so pretty in a vase
You lift your deceitful faces to the world.
I may arrange you how I wish
And I may rejoice that your thorns 
Lack the sting of real thorns;
But betrayed, you always are
When I touch you.


Your delicately moulded petals are cold,
And you stand upright
Because you can do no other.
You lack the perfume 
That is nature's inner attraction,
And you do not droop and wilt,
For you know not what it is to lack water.


In pretending to live
You are no flower.
Forever beautiful,
You live not at all.


Forget artifice, but dare to take a drink 
From the bottomless well of life,
And you will find the wonder of your making,
The divinity of life, ripe for the picking.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Schiavina Avatar
August 3, 2017 at 9:45 AM
Excellent! One of the best I have read.
Gist Avatar
May 4, 2017 at 8:52 PM
This is a mind boggler it goes so many ways and means so many things... #Fake and Real!
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 29, 2017 at 8:44 PM
At least you don't have to water plastic flowers. A lovely poem,also a 7.
Behm Avatar
April 28, 2017 at 8:58 PM
Great last stanza. Kurt
Swana  Avatar
April 28, 2017 at 6:10 PM
Gerald freaking poem Cecelia I reallly enjoyed the timid darkness <33 hopefully you will shall the love
Johnson Avatar
April 18, 2017 at 6:34 PM
Good poem Cecelia. I once heard a song, There's nothing like the real thing..... Good message.
Sami Avatar
April 18, 2017 at 5:09 PM
Very clever with an important message. Well done Cecelia
Duffield Avatar
April 18, 2017 at 6:41 AM
I think your extended metaphor is well developed and concluded with a clear message. Well done! Nature can teach us many good lessons!
Coreggia Avatar
April 2, 2017 at 4:50 PM
Cecilia, I love the flow of your poem and the power of your message. It's beautifully done. A 7 :) Amitiés
Wanter Avatar
April 1, 2017 at 6:54 PM
Very deep metaphor, Cecelia! Loved it.
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