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Plantar Ice

Plantar Ice The snow, deliciously stabbing. This treat for bare feet, astounding. Tap-tap, my attention grabbing. Lost mind, all reason confounding. This treat for bare feet, astounding, as by leaps, a senseless lesson. Lost mind, all reason confounding. Plantar ice, I bind my stress in. As by leaps, a senseless lesson, cruel picks chipping the sole martyr. Plantar ice, I bind my stress in. Sans shoes? Why couldn’t I be smarter? Cruel picks chipping the sole martyr. Tap-tap, my attention grabbing. Sans shoes; why couldn’t I be smarter? The snow, deliciously stabbing.

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Date: 3/13/2025 11:08:00 PM
I thought deep the feelings invoked in the spiritual and physical sense. I surely missed your work - I have some catching up to do tonight. <3
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/17/2025 7:44:00 PM
And you know, now I’m catching up with thank yous…Thank you!
Date: 3/2/2025 9:37:00 AM
Great Kim! Imagery surrounding the moment. :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/17/2025 7:45:00 PM
Thank you, Linda!
Date: 2/27/2025 12:03:00 PM
Wonderful Pantoum Kim. The imagery is excellent. My feet are cold.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/27/2025 12:19:00 PM
LOL! Thank you, Oliver!
Date: 2/27/2025 10:41:00 AM
I really enjoyed reading your "Plantar Ice" write. "Good Luck" if for contest. Have a wonderful/blessed day writing away..................
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/27/2025 12:20:00 PM
Thank you, Paula!
Date: 2/27/2025 9:47:00 AM
great and metaphysical experience, i loved the snow imagery , just thoughtful, thanks poet
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/27/2025 12:22:00 PM
Thank you so much! :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/27/2025 12:20:00 PM
Thank you so much! :)
Date: 2/27/2025 6:33:00 AM
Never go out without a practical cushion of faith. Interesting write. Still trying to figure this one out. But, so well done, it is worth the effort.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/27/2025 9:43:00 AM
Chipping away at it, eh?! Thank you for taking the time, my dear friend!

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