Plantar Ice

Plantar Ice The snow, deliciously stabbing. This treat for bare feet, astounding. Tap-tap, my attention grabbing. Lost mind, all reason confounding. This treat for bare feet, astounding, as by leaps, a senseless lesson. Lost mind, all reason confounding. Plantar ice, I bind my stress in. As by leaps, a senseless lesson, cruel picks chipping the sole martyr. Plantar ice, I bind my stress in. Sans shoes? Why couldn’t I be smarter? Cruel picks chipping the sole martyr. Tap-tap, my attention grabbing. Sans shoes; why couldn’t I be smarter? The snow, deliciously stabbing.
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Hind Avatar
March 13, 2025 at 11:08 PM
I thought deep the feelings invoked in the spiritual and physical sense. I surely missed your work - I have some catching up to do tonight. <3
Rodrigues Avatar
April 17, 2025 at 7:44 PM
And you know, now I’m catching up with thank yous…Thank you!
Fowler Avatar
March 2, 2025 at 9:37 AM
Great Kim! Imagery surrounding the moment. :)
Rodrigues Avatar
April 17, 2025 at 7:45 PM
Thank you, Linda!
Mckeithan Avatar
February 27, 2025 at 12:03 PM
Wonderful Pantoum Kim. The imagery is excellent. My feet are cold.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 27, 2025 at 12:19 PM
LOL! Thank you, Oliver!
Goldsmith Avatar
February 27, 2025 at 10:41 AM
I really enjoyed reading your "Plantar Ice" write. "Good Luck" if for contest. Have a wonderful/blessed day writing away..................
Rodrigues Avatar
February 27, 2025 at 12:20 PM
Thank you, Paula!
Rolland Avatar
February 27, 2025 at 9:47 AM
great and metaphysical experience, i loved the snow imagery , just thoughtful, thanks poet
Rodrigues Avatar
February 27, 2025 at 12:22 PM
Thank you so much! :)
Rodrigues Avatar
February 27, 2025 at 12:20 PM
Thank you so much! :)
DiMino Avatar
February 27, 2025 at 6:33 AM
Never go out without a practical cushion of faith. Interesting write. Still trying to figure this one out. But, so well done, it is worth the effort.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 27, 2025 at 9:43 AM
Chipping away at it, eh?! Thank you for taking the time, my dear friend!
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