Plain Pain

Plain Pain.

There's a heavy pain on top of my joy,
Little room nails scratching my whole,
All of me helpless and hopeless,
The goal was joy now in the 
Goal mouth there's sore,
Necessity to comprehend the whole thing 
Is no more appealing to my present,
How old is I to be fooled?
How long from now will it take to appeal to be true?
Yesterday I wasn't perfect but real in the mud 
Now I appear to be but fake in the cart,
Who is fooling who I wonder 
Who else shall say it louder than I?
The present seem to be non kind 
And my kind seem to be non present,
Who is I to follow with joy 
When there is none in me in secret?
Who is I to laugh to the joke of reality 
When they are not at all?
Who is I to judge human nature with an eye
That see far closer than nowhere?
There's a walk for me to take 
I realised there's a lot at stake,
Alone with I,me and me 
Releasing each drop for joy to be found 
Never the less there's none to be for I to smile.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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July 15, 2016 at 3:44 PM
Congrats Bolton, for having this piece featured in Poetry Soup homepage!!! ;-)
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June 12, 2016 at 10:20 PM
Bolton, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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June 9, 2016 at 6:10 PM
Bolton, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT**
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June 9, 2016 at 6:18 PM
Hello SKAT my name is Bolton 20 year old medical student who was a victim of depression Poetry helped me escape depression and yeah thanks for being nice SKAT
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June 9, 2016 at 8:21 AM
- A deeply moving poem, Bolton - Welcome to the Poetry Soup - hugs // Sun :)
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