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There were soul crevices, mind holes, caves cut into the walls of daydreams, places deep enough to hide in and be used as a refuge when the world began to pick you apart - you could stay there for hours, days, weeks, even a lifetime and they wouldn't know you had gone except for that far away look in your eyes and the delay drawn out by distance when giving replies, ‘she's stuck in her own little world’ they would say, sealing you in with your hurt.

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Date: 4/14/2024 10:36:00 PM
So many things used to just be accepted as fact - I presume in some ways because I was more naive about a situation but possibly because less was done. The motto seeming to be 'leave well alone' - which I know to mean 'don't get involved' but now looks an intriguing phrase. How often 'in our own world' do we not 'leave well alone' to our own detriment... There doesn't always need to be the outward display of picking the self apart. How wonderful if there were a magic phrase instead to remedy it
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Paul Willason
Date: 4/19/2024 8:04:00 PM
Such an interesting response to the poem my dear Dilly...thankyou for sharing your thoughts. Always a complex subject... Taue care, Paul
Date: 4/14/2024 5:31:00 PM
a deep and soulful poem, Paul. I liked soul crevices, mind holes, caves cut into the walls of daydreams, places deep enough to hide in and be used as a refuge when the world began to pick you apart The ultimate psychological escape. I've known a few people of which you describe who are 'stuck in their own world.' This poem is poignant; I liked it A LOT!
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Paul Willason
Date: 4/19/2024 8:08:00 PM
Good to get your take on this poem Sara, very much appreciate your analysis and supportive comments as always.

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