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Cold and dark; light becomes less. The further I go, the more I know there's less chance of escape. Dull yet sharp, the piercing feeling always remains. Numbing to the core, cold to the touch, unpleasant to the mind. Silence to the ears, less and less to your soul. There's no help past the entrance, you're stuck, you're finished, you're through, unless you find another as lost as you.

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Date: 8/23/2015 12:22:00 AM
Makenna, Congratulations on having your poem featured on the homepage. **SKAT**
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Date: 8/22/2015 9:42:00 PM
"unless you find another as lost as you" Yesss! Isn't that usually how it happens? At least in my case it has over the years. Love! My belief is that love causes more grief and turmoil than anything else in the world. Still . . . We continue to try . . .
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Date: 7/5/2015 11:39:00 PM
hi makenna, this is a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Makenna Taylor
Date: 7/6/2015 4:10:00 PM
thank you!!
Date: 7/5/2015 9:26:00 PM
Makenna, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Makenna Taylor
Date: 7/6/2015 4:10:00 PM
hey !! thank you for the warm welcome!! it's nice to be in such a welcoming and positive environment!

Book: Shattered Sighs