Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Poet Imagism

Pizza - Listing Makes - a Robust Treat

PIZZA- LISTING MAKES - A ROBUST TREAT

                      Thin, thick or double crust...Tell me what you lust. 
 Variant  flavors, eye-wheel hush. Tickling your  tastebuds to blush..Ham, vegy,
     pepperoni, it has.. Cheesy or saucy, it is just. Each piece, one great blast 
        Oven-fresh a delicious trust! Mouth and nose will combust! Allured to
          pizza's smokey gust. Merrily! I'll eat two or three. Especially when
               given for free. Though sometimes, I crave whole. For each
                   savory part a full! One or two takes, isn't a big ache.
                       Healthy body will not be at stake.For you can
                          choose each flake. Combine it with fresh 
                                juicy shake. If you got much, do 
                                  some quakes. So fats and
                                      big bellies will break.  
                                         All these makes
                                             pizza one 
                                               robust 
                                                treat

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Sponsor	Sheri Fresonke Harper Contest Name	
The Subject Listing Makes Us ______ 
Placed 1st
                                        (c) Olive Eloisa
                                              4:54pm
                                    revised: May 05, 2014

NOTE: VEGY i shortened the word vegetable :D

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James Fraser November 24, 2014 at 12:05 PM Blimey, I've already asked you out for a Coffee & a Doughnut. In for a penny, in for a pound, fancy a Pizza your choice, James ;-) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser November 27, 2014 at 2:57 AM hahah :) thanks much James.. :) pizza is one good pig out food.. :D

Keith Merritt June 19, 2014 at 4:15 PM This poem took some work to perfect. I love the imagery AND I love pizza, so it truly makes me hungry to imitate the form. Good work, Olive ! -- Keith Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 19, 2014 at 5:32 PM Thank you KEith.. :D and I too love pizza.. :D let's go buy one and sit and have lil chit chat.. :D jokes!! God bless. :)

Sara Kendrick June 19, 2014 at 3:58 PM Congrats on winning work..Way to go..Sara Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 19, 2014 at 5:08 PM Thank you Sara.. :) yes its way way to go.. :D

Pandita Sietesantos June 18, 2014 at 8:39 AM Excellent win, Olive - so yummy for my tummy! I'll have an everything pizza, thank you:-) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 19, 2014 at 5:05 PM hahaha :D no problem Pandita.. :) let's go!

Dr.Ram Mehta June 17, 2014 at 10:26 PM Congratulations on a fine win in the subject listing contest, Olive Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 18, 2014 at 2:03 AM ThAnk you too..:)

Tim Smith June 17, 2014 at 6:15 PM My mouth is watering.... Congrats Olive...hugs Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 18, 2014 at 2:02 AM Let's go eat pizza..:D

Carolyn Devonshire June 17, 2014 at 5:19 PM Dear Olive, If my diet goes bust, your poem will be the culprit. LOL I love it! Congratulations, my friend. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 18, 2014 at 2:01 AM Hahaha Carolyn..:)!! I have advice I said do some shakes...:D!

Paul Callus June 17, 2014 at 4:26 PM CONGRATULATIONS Olive_eloi!!! Top spot once again:) You managed to make a well-shaped pizza with delightful ingredients. I would not mind sharing one with you....thin crusty base, pls. // paul Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 17, 2014 at 4:59 PM Thank you PAul.. :) i didn't expect this.. :) hahha yes that's my favorite too thin crusted pizza.. :D

Joyce Johnson June 17, 2014 at 2:05 PM Great thought, form and poem. congratulations on your first place. Love, joyce Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 17, 2014 at 4:58 PM Thank you Joyce.. :) I appreciate it much.. :D

Sheri Fresonke Harper June 17, 2014 at 1:32 PM Olive, excellent poem, I am glad you shared your interest with us all. Congratulations on your win! Sorry for the late results, thanks very much for entering my contest. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 17, 2014 at 4:58 PM That's alright Sheri.. :) Thank you very much for the place,... :) i didn't expect to be at the top.. :) but thank you.. :)

Michael Byte January 18, 2014 at 6:56 PM Oh my friend I am hungry for pizza know lol. Kudos good write friend Michael Byte January 19, 2014 at 2:10 PM OK I will get one and send it special delivery lol Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser January 19, 2014 at 1:51 PM hurry buy one and share :D hahahah i want hawaian with lots of cheese :D