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pixy nymph dance

. 'pon yesss 'pon the acres uv lavender there whut the poet longs for the sparkling slight clad in crystal blue with sparkling diaphanous wingz spining tumbling with blue crystals spilling in circles the Spring wind touching it's soft cauzing gentle slow rise the artist enthralled for the Sun outlines too the taut through that diaphanous frock

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 1/27/2024 9:50:00 AM

Oh, I truly love the sensuality in this ethereal write James. Thank you for sharing this. hugs Linda :)

James Peranteau
Date: 2/1/2024 10:28:00 AM

;)

Duke Beaufort

Date: 1/22/2024 4:07:00 PM

Nice when there's a pretty scene to contemplate. The fields of lavender or others can be stunning. Thanks for letting me visualize it.

James Peranteau
Date: 2/1/2024 10:27:00 AM

;)...you came at the right/write time dear poet...i'm reading acolades whilst hern pretty begins hern smother...ty

Jan Allison

Date: 1/22/2024 11:19:00 AM

the imagery is exquisite James, i especially love the use of diaphanous it adds an air of sensually and sexiness to your descriptorn adding this to my faves:-) hugs Jan xx

James Peranteau
Date: 1/22/2024 3:34:00 PM

needless to say, yet i'll say it anywho...it pleases me to please you ')...by the way, that write you graced us with, "precipice" saving the boy's life, wow, in fact; i think that i'll tell you there...Jan, i don't comment much, my "epigram 8"..lol, i never explained it; yet that's why i wrote it, 'cuze there have been pneuma who appreciated not mine thoughts, thus i've ceased almost to the 'nun', yet when i meet the astute, *smiles* mine unintentionally rambles on ;) g2g....much love dear poet