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Evoke and pray to Gods Varun* and Indra* And to Apollo not to go on long vacation Play hide and seek with the earth as kids do And bring a rainbow with its rich colors to see. Do not bring mausim** in excess Even Nectar consumed in excess Or any overdose creates havoc. Bringing epidemics and floods Destroying infrastructures. Let the earth look as fresh as A young girl after her shower. Let creativity bloom for poets To write poems on rain, as I do. As it did to Shakespeare and Kalidas* To write The Tempest and Meghdootam* Two masterpieces of the two bards. I hear thunder, I hear thunder Don’t bring misery and hunger. Kids be ready with your raincoats Find the papers to make paper boats Wearing the gumboots. The Eastern winds beat me As does the storm of my soul I know, the storm fades away soon Monsoon is still inside and outside. +++ September 9, 2014 Form: Verse Dr. Ram Mehta First Place Win Contest: Rainy Days by Leonara Ghalinta *Varuna and Indra are the Aryan rain and storm gods respectively in Hinduism. *The term 'monsoon' is derived from the Arabic word mausim which means a time or a season *The great Indian dramatist Kalidasa wrote Meghdoot symbolically using clouds as messenger. *Shakespeare too wrote The Tempest keeping thunderbolt and its implications in mind..

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Date: 6/21/2020 12:04:00 AM
I hear thunder, I hear thunder Don’t bring misery and hunger......poetic gem with excellent poetic expression...thanks for such exquisite poem sharing
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Date: 10/10/2014 3:03:00 PM
Dr. Ram, I really enjoyed your poem. Congratulations on your first place win! Sandra
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Date: 10/10/2014 10:19:00 AM
Congrats on your win Dr Ram
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Date: 10/10/2014 8:47:00 AM
A lot said in a few lines. Congrats on the win.
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Date: 10/10/2014 8:27:00 AM
- Many beautiful 1st place winning poem ..... - I enjoy reading yours, Dr.Ram !! - Congratulations! - Happy weekend :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/10/2014 7:32:00 AM
Such a beautifully crafted poem Dr. Mehta. I enjoyed reading this very much. I feel like you gave us a taste of your beautiful culture. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 10/10/2014 4:31:00 AM
I love the title to this expressive write. many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xxx
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Date: 10/10/2014 3:15:00 AM
Congratulations my dear poet friend Dr. Ram. I thoroughly enjoyed your wonderful write! Thank you so much for sharing and your loving support. Hugs and cheers! Love lots, Leonora
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Date: 10/10/2014 7:51:00 AM
Your much welcome my dear friend Dr. Mehta. Your poem deserved it. By the way, happy happy birthday!!! Best wishes!! Biggest birthday hugs!
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Dr.Ram Mehta
Date: 10/10/2014 5:52:00 AM
Thanks for picking up my poem for the award, Leo
Date: 1/5/2014 7:59:00 AM
Dr. Ram What a unique and interesting write. The description and imagery captures the readers attention from beginning to end. You created a fascinating tale and story. Nice job Thanks for the congrats and nice comment on my Horsie poem.
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Date: 6/21/2010 7:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Paula Swanson's contest "Monsoon Storms" DR. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/20/2010 2:43:00 PM
We are needing a cooling rain here about now..It is very hot and uncomfortable out there...Keep the creative and educational pen flowing...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..I appreciate you taking the time to do that..Sara
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Date: 6/17/2010 8:04:00 PM
Very well writen! Good Luck in the contest!~Tirzah~
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Date: 6/17/2010 1:20:00 PM
Congrats Dr. Ram on your HM in the Monsoon contest with this wonderful write and win .. now enjoy your very special honor my dear friend.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 6/16/2010 6:21:00 PM
Very impressive,..wonderful !
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Date: 6/16/2010 10:01:00 AM
soup mail again.
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Date: 6/16/2010 9:15:00 AM
Dr Ram, this is a very interesting and informative write, put together in a very pleasant way. Soup mail is on the way. Charles
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Date: 6/15/2010 10:10:00 PM
Your entry is interesting and exotic and exciting. It should do well in the monsoon contest. Thank you for your comments on my blue rose. Love, joyce
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Date: 6/15/2010 8:30:00 PM
Magnificent Dr. Ram.. a painting in words and so vibrantly beautiful.. if for a contest ..good luck.. very creative my friend.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 6/15/2010 10:09:00 AM
Love the picture you give me here... and glad you like my wordplay... always enjoy your comments...thank you
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Date: 6/15/2010 9:57:00 AM
imagery so vivid. makes me want to walk in the rain
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Date: 6/15/2010 9:57:00 AM
imagery so vivid. makes me want to walk in the rain
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Date: 6/15/2010 8:36:00 AM
Hinduism is clearly seen in the poem. Keep up the good work.Enjoy this rainy season to the fullest.The comparison in the line "Let the earth look as fresh as A young girl after her shower" is really good.
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Date: 6/15/2010 4:53:00 AM
Great and creative poem, Dr. Ram! I lived for some month in Sri Lanka and know what mausim (monsoon) means. I also remember Bangla Desh with the flooding problems. Well written! And thank you for your kind comments. Have a nice day...Gert
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Date: 6/15/2010 3:41:00 AM
A really creative poem and clearly well thouught throught before writing, thanks for this upload, I really enjoyed it. Regards, Gavin.
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Date: 6/14/2010 9:18:00 PM
Loved your write, and very intresting facts you put on the bottom, thanks for the feedback, enjoyed your write...P.D.
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