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Piranha In the Soup

P erchance has anyone seen something fishy
I n the pot of soup we all like to eat?
R aucous spices of refute with long spikey teeth.
A re there some questionable ingredients that do
N ot blend well with all the others?
H ave you smelled the odor, the fishy stench they put out?
A dding a little more water may tame the flavor down.

I ngredients in a broth should compliment each other
N ot over power like the bitter taste of thistle weed.

T aste and see if the soup really needs any more salt
H ere's hoping some spices will not assault your tongue.
E njoying a bowl of soup should only bring dining pleasure.

S o be careful when you measure the spices from the shelf,
O r you might find you'll belch and have to spit it out.
U ntil you know what seasonings are thrown into the pot,
P lease don't let a piranha chef spoil the soup in the kitchen.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Hamilton Avatar
December 24, 2015 at 1:57 PM
Nice acrostic, here's hoping for better soup next year! Piranha actually tastes good! Just make sure it's dead or it bites back! lol Thanks Lin!
Lane Avatar
December 24, 2015 at 2:04 PM
Thanks, but I'll leave the eating of those nasty fish to you, John.
Dietrich Avatar
December 24, 2015 at 12:50 PM
ME LIKEY (this poem, not the bad fish!!)
Lane Avatar
December 24, 2015 at 12:51 PM
Good! Grab a spoon and dig in.
Allison Avatar
December 24, 2015 at 10:39 AM
Excellent acrostic Lin I hope soup is no longer spoiled and there is no longer a bitter aftertaste here:-) hugs Jan xx
Lane Avatar
December 24, 2015 at 11:19 AM
Thanks, Jan. A fine holed strainer might help.
Lamoureux Avatar
December 24, 2015 at 10:00 AM
A clever piece! Merry Christmas and thanks for only adding good flavour to the soup.
Lane Avatar
December 24, 2015 at 10:07 AM
Thanks, Richard! Everything in life is sweeter when the right ingredients are used. and thank you for the compliment.
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