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Dressed, yellow, not red to distract, Drapes, and flows, not all tightly wrapped, Down to toes, not up like a skirt, Statuesque, not loose like a flirt, Fond of her, sad, for we must part, Now a change, new girl for my heart, Just my thoughts, of then passing day, New girl on wall, for month of May.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 5/15/2019 12:21:00 PM
Good one Panagiota
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Hilo Poet
Date: 5/15/2019 12:29:00 PM
And thanks Panagiota, Aloha wk
Date: 5/15/2019 6:03:00 AM
Lol!! That had a funny ending!! Good one :)
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Date: 5/15/2019 6:39:00 AM
Much appreciated Swetha, Aloha wk
Date: 5/15/2019 1:31:00 AM
The ending is hilarious. I liked it that there was no clue in the middle spoiling it.
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Date: 5/15/2019 2:31:00 AM
Hehe, Agatha's Poirot, Miss Marple left clueless on this little gem, thanks Caren for your time for your comment, let alone, reading it, Aloha wk
Date: 5/14/2019 8:11:00 PM
Interesting twist on ye olde Calendar Girl! ~ Gershon
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Date: 5/14/2019 8:34:00 PM
Yeah, like mystery novel, saved it to the very end, thanks again Gershon, Aloha wk
Date: 5/14/2019 5:32:00 PM
Clever write..lovely flow..dream on!
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Date: 5/14/2019 5:38:00 PM
Yeah, that it'd be Vijay, thanks, Aloha wk

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